Oh so sweet thanks for a very good read but not long enough

Hahaha. Sometimes Jane just has such a smug attitude - I'd want to tweak his nose too. Fun story. Thanks.

Very good! I liked it!

Poor Patrick

Maybe you should compensate him By writing a fluff tale Where he gets showered with Prezzies.

Giggle, that was cute. (Except for you know the poor girl being murdered)

Firstly, you should write more. You are extremely talented, and I just really want more reasons to see emails from you pop up in my inbox.

Secondly, I give the best words...don't I? ;)

Lastly, this piece is just so amazing! I love all the characters (especially with how you wrote them), and it just puts a giant smile on my face after a long day. You are amazing, dear. 3

Bahaha I think Lisbon should tweak Jane's nose more often. Because he needs it.

I also think that you should write/update more often _

Nice one shot. In character and well written. Plus I loved the ending in this one. Thanks for sharing it.

that was mean..Lisbon tweeking Jane's nose. come on arn't they getting a little too old for that kind of stuff? Now I didn't say he deserved a punch in the nose form time to time for the crazy things he does. And head's up you all: I saw pictures of the season fainally, and Simond Baker was in a photo with a real security guard, and it looked like (from the makeup dept) he had a black eye and his clothes were disshovel. so, in the last episode, someone punch Jane in the eye, and a beauty to begain with. the question is Who did it and why? Or as Jane would say "That's two questions."

Great dialogue here! And very smooth the way you incorporated all those words. I thought for a minute myself and my mind went blank, lol. You should keep this one going. We need more good fics right now.

Clicking the story alert to be optimistic :)