Very well written and edited. My only nitpick is you should reorganize your tags. Riku is no where near the second main character and the least likable with your writing sooo... Still a fantastic read. Pacing was a little slow. Also you seem to like watching Sora suffer a little too much.

can you make a chapter were Sora gets out of the wheelchair and gets captured again? pleeeaaassseee?!

Can you make another chapter we’re sora gets out of the wheelchair and gets captured again?

Just finished reading this whole thing (over the past few days) and I loved every moment of it! I have to agree with you, I think my fav part was when Sora used the potion on Axel. Though all of your “edited” comments made me laugh, too! The only thing I didn’t like was that poor Riku was stuck looking like Ansem, but I’ll just pretend that he figured out a way out of it later on ha. Anyway, great work, great story!

Holy crap this story was a roller coaster ride from start to finish! Literally there were so many edge of your seat moments that I can't even count them. I've read every free moment of the day for the last 2 days because I just had to know what happens next. Brilliant story, and I saw on AO3 (where I started read this fic) that you'll be working on a sequel? I hope so because this was amazing!

good story, but come on. No closure? I don't like that at all. I liked the story otherwise; why no closure?

Ok so almost everyone’s comments are paragraphs so that says a lot about the story I want to write a paragraph to so let’s get started lol

This was a reeeaaaally great story! I binged it over the last few days. I wanted a darker Kingdom Hearts story and you delivered! I would have liked more closure with Sora and his friends... Maybe like a time skip scene. But I liked his closure with himself. Great job!

I have absolutely, thoroughly enjoyed this entire story and I'm so so glad you shared it with us!

everyone give a giant round of applause for one of the few that has more than 10 million words

Just some formatting advice: these giant paragraphs are a headache to read. Might you consider splitting them up a bit? It’s a slog that unfairly detracts from an otherwise excellent story

that was a wonderful chapter and I can't wait for more:)

First time i ever left a comment for this story was july 16th 2012 I was 19 I believe. Heartbroken and no friends. Your story deffinitley toom many things off my mind. This was the only story i really ever liked and for the past years i couldnt find it. I knew your name was something kitty or cat. So imagine trying to find your story based of that lol. But i found it and reread it! Thanks for your awesome work!

RRRRIIIIIKKUUUUUUU GO SAVE HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIM !¡!¡! How dare you do this to me

And the blood will dry underneath my nails
And the wind will rise up to fill my sails
So you can doubt and you can hate
But I know no matter what it takes

I'm coming home, I'm coming home
Tell the world I'm coming home
Let the rain wash away
All the pain of yesterday
I know my kingdom awaits
And they've forgiven my mistakes
I'm coming home, I'm coming home
Tell the world I'm coming, home

(Holy frikkin heck this made me cry happy tears well done I applaud you good sir)