I just had to leave a review! This is so good I loved it it was really sweet and I don't know I simply loved it! Thanks for writing such a sweet story I had a nice time reading it!

The story is awesome, a little mistakes in the grammar though but still i enjoyed it a lot.

I loved the end when you find out her mother was there! a couple spelling errors and they made some parts a little confusing but very good!

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That was just so adorable ! The atmosphere was still like inuyasha's story just in modern world. The only thing that probably shocked me was "Hey Babe" from kikyo that made me crack up. but that is so good you should consider writing more of that story!

That was really good. I like it!