Reviews for Graze |
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stay.traught.i'm.deactivated chapter 1 . 5/1/2012 Heh, I'm a giddy fangirl, too, so don't feel alone. XD Love the fic; it has a rather quiet aura, nice and sweet and peaceful. :) |
mizone chapter 1 . 4/28/2012 WHOA THAT WAS BRILLIANT. Please keep writing more Makorra! Everyone was in character and omg, your fanfic was amazing. More Makorra! |
tfobmv18 chapter 1 . 4/27/2012 I absolutely love it. Keep up the good work. |
rikki shiratori chapter 1 . 4/25/2012 i literally squealed when i saw an alert about this! haha. i am both a makorra fangirl and a big fan of your work. i certainly hope for more inspiration from them to come to you :) |
Ju5t An0th3r H3d63h06 chapter 1 . 4/25/2012 Stupid fanfiction mobile login spazzing. I'm right with you on the whole 'squee-and-laugh-like-a-giddy-fangirl' thing! Wish I could do something like this, but I'm not comfortable enough with writing their styles seem to be good at it already, though. *anime pout* I'm so jealous. No grammar errors to speak of, but I was reading fast so I couldn't really tell. But if there are, nothing story-impeding. Nice meshing of the shippy scenes! Went back to read it, cuz I didn't catch it at first. Or maybe I'm just suffering from lack of sleep. :/ Heh, I may have accidentally introduced my sister to Legend of Korra and got her scarily obsessed with Mako. Whoopsies. |
Dsman chapter 1 . 4/25/2012 dude i just saw that epasode and i had to watch it 3 times to see every part of it |
Julia451 chapter 1 . 4/25/2012 Now THIS is a good fic! I love your phraseology and your interpretation of Mako's thought-processes. Every paragraph is better than the last. It's just... so refreshing to read something so creative, smart, and well-written. Thanks for the great job! |
closed1412 chapter 1 . 4/25/2012 That was adorable. Thank you for writing that :) |
GirlCat817 chapter 1 . 4/25/2012 Join the chorus of fangirls after that episode. I like the point about it being under and overstated. Excellent use of third person limited. Loved it, my first favorite for this fandom. |