Huh, I didn’t expect Edward to become a different person. This story is very interesting, I hope you continue!

ehehehehehEHEHEHHWHWWHHEE kiss

also sad hohenheim nnOOOOO

Oh, wow. This is really cool! I like the worldbuilding stuff showing up here, Ed's poorly thought out but reasonable actions (no accidentally-cutting-yourself-on-the-arcane-artifact scene here!) and really just this writing in general. Thank you for writing. Can't wait to see where this goes! :)

I'm reading this four years later, but I have to admit, this is probably one of the best fullmetal fanfics I've ever read! It has all the elements of a well-written story, and I would really love to see the outcome;; This chapter was such a cliffhanger! It's so intriguing, but provides enough information to draw your own conclusions. The characters are always on point. It's great, really. I love your story so much!

This is fascinating, and I hope you find the motivaation and inspiration and time to update soon.

Just gonna throw in a little support here, hope you're doing well! Looking forward to future chapters! I hope motivation and inspiration find you and writing goes smoothly!

This fanfic is amazing! You have got me hooked and I cannot wait to find out more!
Where is Ed being taken? Who are the mysterious bandits? Do Mustang and crew save Edward in time? What happened when Ed touched the slap?
Find out in the next chapters of "Son of Xerxes"!
- LokiTyv
I'm only theorizing here, so bear with me, but what if the alchemy removed his Elric DNA, and made him a full blooded Xerxian?

Damn! We were just getting to the good part!

Mustang is such a badass

I love Roy in this

please update

This story is so interesting OMG! I wanna know what's up with Ed ever since he activated a Xerxian-only ray. Whatever it is, it seems to be really bad.
The plot for the story is especially very interesting! Like, why are those guys targeting Ed (and possibly his family)?
i really like that little plot twist of Hohenheim giving up his alchemy and souls for Al's body, rather than Ed giving up his alchemy. I wonder what prompted him to make that decision tho, especially since Ed didn't want Hohenheim to do something like that. At least he's still alive! (For now, at least).

Seeing that you didn't upload for more than a year made me kinda sad TBH. But if you're busy irl, then I do wish you great luck! I hope you could update the story one day, tho!

Update soon, it's pretty interesting

I hardly ever review stories on here but I am so eager to see how this plays out and I'm checking everyday! It's well written as well, really beautiful xxxx

Wow. This is an amazing story. I love how well you write everyone!