So Percy is just going to be the Hunt's bitch the entire story. Glad to know you fucker. It's like he's a spineless bitch who let's everyone push him around

Zoe : Yeets the cake .
Me : YOU SHALL PAY FOR THIS .!

I like your story what you could improve is when having characters speaking make it clear to the reader who is speaking.

THIS STORY IS SOOOOO FUCKING GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD

I really love this story, please update it.. this is by far the best story i have read here in Fanfiction.. i wish you continue it

I love your story! I hope the hunters will warm up soon.

OK, VERY OOC Artemis, kinda takes away from any significance/difficulty of them becoming friends later on, since they started at first names and we're thinking they'd become friends in like five minutes. Most (good)stories that'd be several chapters in at a minimum.

The pace is a little poor, the structure is formulaic, 'I did this, thought about that. Then I went over here and this happened'. See what I mean? Not bad, but since I don't know if you've written anything before I'll reserve critical judgement.

This story is very interesting, I want so much for it to be amazing.

Hephaestus

I was hooked by the description and first few paragraphs. It seemed a bit rushed to start the story, with arguably unnecessary POV changes, bit that could just be your style. While I'm not a personal fan of them there's nothing wrong with it.
But overall I'm excited for this story and I hope you're updating it or finisher. Hope you don't take what I said negatively, just stating what I thought.

As I was reading I exclaimed 'Now THIS is how you start a story!' I'm totally hooked. Can't wait to read more.

Hephaestus

Just wanna let you know, you’ve been spelling ambrosia as arombosia. It’s no big deal, just letting you know, even if others may or may not have pointed it out already.

OK, so first of all, I really liked the beginning. You seem like a really good authour. However, there were no banners or any indication that we had switched times. Hell, we never learned what time the first few chapters were in. I'm really confused about what happened. It's really disjointed. Maybe it's just me and I skipped a chapter, but in my perspective, we went from Artemis crying over her Perseus performing in Romeo and Juliet to this chapter, and tbh I have no idea what happens in it. Other than that, I love this book- I'm just very confused.
Leisel

But it doesn't make since if it's 500 years in the past there would be no WW1 or WW2 there could be the Trojan war but that's it

Some major grammar issues

The story started well, but due to the story being in Ancient Greece the number of modern items and such mentioned, kinda ruined it for me. It felt like you couldn’t decide if the story was in Ancient Greece or in Modern Times

It’s a good story so far but the quality of this chapter seems to be off compared to the earlier chapters.

Oh Please Please write more of this story. It's so good.