This is such a cute story! I think every woman with children can relate to how she feels. I know I can. It was so sweet when her husband asked her out to breakfast. It made me smile!

You've really captured the book's tone here, and I love the view of a happier moment in their marriage. Poor Ed really gets the shaft, so it's nice to see him a bit more loving and understanding.

Aw, I love this. I can SO relate to Evelyn. Well done!

this was cute- so funny that her scale was avacado green metal and she listened to Diana Ross and watched Jane Fonda, makes me nostalgic and reminds me of my mom.