This was...ingenious. Simply...incredible. I probably read this entire thing within a couple days because it was so engaging, and there were enough cliff hangers to keep the reader hooked. You are an amazing writer. Your writing style, characterization, plot line, spelling, grammar, they were all spot on. I must admit there were a couple confusing things, like the Orochimaru reference, but on everything else you were great! Amazing story.

Maybe it's a bit sadistic, but I find stories that have an aspect of torture within them, if they are written and portrayed correctly, likable because they can really impact how the reader views those situations. I think you did a good job on Iruka's psyche, having to watch Kakashi and everything he was going through. You even kept Kakashi pretty in character throughout him having to see Iruka watching him suffer, and in turn trying to have him lighten Iruka's mood on the situation.

Excellent. Brilliant. I'm going to go stalk your fanfics now. :)

I loved your story thank you for taking the time to write such an awesome story even if kakashi was an ass in the beginning it was hilarious and then the ending was so sweet I loved it please continue writing in the future.

Oh I wish Nature Transformation: Elemental Hounds was canon! That would be an amazing thing to see.

I loved it! a fabulous story! just awesome!

Awwww! it feels like this should continue!

Wonderful, I love your iruka!

I like your story. Thank you for posting. I am now going to check your profile and check out your other stories. :)

This is such an exciting story and so cleverly written. I love the banter and you really know how to write action scenes. Thank you so much for writing and sharing :)

This is awesome! : D I can't believe you've gotten so few reviews (and that they arn't over the moon for this story)! I like the humor, I like the way you portray the characters both cannon and OC, everyone acted realisticly and they made the plot move along in a sensible and truthworthy way! I also liked the plot, again because it's realistic I, as a reader, get the feeling that this COULD happen. ;)

I also liked that Iruka and Kakashi didn't just jump - well first of all eachother - but also that they didn't just jump into some romance, based on both of them being super hot (like it happens despearingly often i fanfics) I have a hard time believing that there's any love lost between them in the manga, and that's why I'm so glad that you made it reasonable for them to change their opinion of eachother and begin to like each other in a realistic fashion.

I'm using the word realistic a lot. Well it's just so rare to find plausible stories on ffnet... So thank you for posting this. :)

I hope you'll write a sequel or maybe a sidefic? ;). Hope my review made sense! :D

With love from I ran out of good pennames.

I got really confused, but that was probably because I kept zoning out sometimes. I really like the concept of it though it does seem a bit.. tad.. weird.. Just my taste though. You have a really good writing style! Actually, it's excellent, and I hope I see it again!

Is it already done? :/ I hope you make a uhm.. Epilogue! Or a continuation!

Ok. I'm lost on who any of the side characters are or what's going on. There's something missing in this and I wish I could put my finger on it. Lost interest in the story. Its not engaging. I know its just fanfic. But without keeping your readers attention, you miss honest reviews.

Ok. I'm lost on who any of the side characters are or what's going on. There's something missing in this and I wish I could put my finger on it. Lost interest in the story. Its not engaging. I know its just fanfic. But without keeping your readers attention, you miss honest reviews.

man this was some intense stuff

oh man what happened now

oh man this is so cute as well as disturbing