This piece of work I really good!

idk why but when someone is raped I just- ... just can't, you know? I cRY. A LOT. like, right now I'M FCKING DYING FROM DEHYDRATION. seriously, I want that fcking asshole to suffer pLEaSe somebody kill him.

I'm still mad at Ares. Please someone kill him bcoz I will not to sToP cRyIng uNtil hE DIES. and hE hAs tO sUFFER.

Hey, I love the story. And my birthday it 12/12 too.

God damn ur good at this btw I Agree with that last paragraph in the prologue (good book btw love it) u could write books and publish them but I saw one mistake and I don't remember were it was on chapter10 to 15 just telling u

awesome!~~

Awww too cute! It made me smile. Good job on the story!

... that was really selfish of Percy. First, she joined a battle her father didn't want her to be in. Then, she decides not to tell Poseidon what Triton said and act against his wishes. She knows how Poseidon is. He gets mad and she throws a fit and disappears in the middle of the battle. I like your story. I really do, but why does it seem as if everyone is at fault for something she did except her?

...this really irked me. Percy would never have been as careless. And then she defeated him at 12 with basically no training. She could've defended herself or teleported away.

Excellent perfect brilliant spectacular fantastic beautiful fabulous

I love what Kalliope is Goddess of, this is an amazing book by the way

Nice. Cool trilogy.

muy buena historia me encanto.

Wow, what else can I say? Wow.

Great series I just finished marathoning them keep up the good work with writing