Hmmm how...realistic

I just. I read the first line and I kind of had to go find a corner to die in. Like, I knew what to expect (Sort of) but yeah.

Weird but likeable. Why not have Harry on top for the first time?

X_X

Gross.

rather insightful, I must say :)

this was cute I like that Harry is the little bunny that keeps going and going and going and going ]

I like how you not only expressed Harry's dislike of the act of anal sex but how believable you made it seem, some people find it abhorrent (not wrong, just not for them) and others truly gain no pleasure from it (whether they're male or female).

I truly liked how you showed Severus' acceptance of Harry's situation, as some might use that as a reason to guilt or pressure their partner into it anyway or even say that they'll "get used to it eventually so just go with it" (yes, I knew someone who did that) thus putting stress on their relationship and breaking it up. I think that they both deserve someone who will be there for them and love, and accept, them no matter what.

The way that you showed Harry doing extra research so that he could find other ways to give and gain pleasure for both of them was the extra step that showed the level of commitment, trust, and love that he had for Severus; the same amount of feeling that Severus, with his acceptance, gave to Harry.

You did a great job on this story and on the subject matter. You also did a great job in creating such a believable situation with the accurate emotions for it as well. I'm so glad that you portrayed such 'realistic' characters and gave them such devoted and understanding personalities.

That would have been interesting to read, if not just a tad bit creepy on my part. It also would have been interesting to see Harry turn to goo as Severus had his way with him anal-ly. Would also had been interesting to have Sev walk in on Harry during on of his 'shower experiments'.

Nice fic but I think you should up the rating, though it is not explicit, it still has rather graphic wording; such as dildo. Young ones read 'T' rated material considering that I was twelve when I read my first VERY graphic, 'T' rated fic, I should know... I've never been the same since. :D

The Pain the Pain. Haven't heard from you lately Topless one.

*snicker*

Docking, eh? Well, some people just can't do the anal thing. Love will find a way...

loved it lots it was great

That was fun. :D. I love the idea of Nocturne Alley gay porn.

But what is docking?