Great and amazing scenario! Loved everything about your caractères and story. Thank you !

Take care

This chapter is highly unrealistic.

I like your story! There were just one thing- I think that you were trying to use the Swedish word for no at the beginning of the chapter, but accidently used the word for noone. If you would like to correct this in the future use nej.
Have a lovely christmas and keep writing.
Emma from Sweden

"No" in Swedish is "Nej" and not "Ingen".
"Ingen" means nobody. Other than that, good chapter

I'm sorta wondering how old Sherlock is in this. In the canon, John is older by 2-3 years. However, here John is 16 but we never see how old Sherlock is.

I really enjoyed this piece. I know it was a lot of work but you did it! Yea! If you go back, you'll also realize how far you came as a writer in just this one piece. Your writing got better with each chapter, which is always the goal.
Here are just a couple of suggestions to make it even smoother. When you use dialogue, attribute it in the same sentence. For example: "Thank you," John said. That way your reader knows who is talking and it flows better.
Also, beware of homonyms, words that sound alike but are spelled differently. For example: here and hear, or past and passed.
You have a gift for storytelling. Once you've refined the tools, you'll be awesome.
Thank you for sharing your work with me.

Honestky I thought I was going to find "inconceivable" somewhere in there, not "as you wish." Oh well. :3

Amazing! Really a beautiful piece of work. So well written and kept with the characters and just a capturing story. I could hardly wait to be done with work and school to come home and read this! I'm about to start the sequel and I hope it's as good as this one :)

It's cool bc none of us know what those other languages are either. Btw this stories amazing. I usually just write one big review at the end but wow :)

Ah I saw that princess bride reference!

Love it!

Such an incredible story! Absolutely love it.

okay, so out of curiosity how old is sherlock in this because i cant figure it out and for some reason its bugging me. Ps, loving it so far.

"As you wish" oh how perfect. I'm in love with your story, I just want to run up to John and hug him and tell him it's ok.

Beautiful Ending!