so, gray and loke huh

I realize that this was written over a year ago, but that doesn't stop me from wishing you had added another chapter!

I can see that Gray loves Lucy but he was a bit too conscious of Loke's relationship with Lucy. Anyways, a great read :)

It is so awesome. Amazing.

Whew What is Loke Gonna Do! ;D LOL Nice Fanfiction

i Lol'ed so hard at the clapping xDDD
this was purrrrfect x33
tho, was it just me or did Gray at times, sound a bit like he's a bit too self-consious of Loke? *insert a yaoi fan giggling here* anywho... amazing piece of work, i'd love to see where this went a bit further *hint hint* but all in all, awesum! great work, do keep it up ;))

Oh my god! Loved the ending! Wonderful. Oh, now I want more...

I loved it, I hope that you update soon

Hahaha! Great story!
I actually loved how you wrote Gray.
Loved it! XD

That's amusing. It's nice that they're not squabbling over Lucy like a piece of meat, instead they're rather gentlemanly about showering her with affection. I like that.

holy shit! i love this and whats with gray keep thinking bout loke while lovemaking?

go gray go! i swear i want gray to win!

Oh that's just awesome.

kyaa~

i love it :3

gray x lucy

I loved this... it's well written... has good characterization... I loved the relationships and the rivalry... though I did find it somewhat unfinished... hope there will be some kind of a continuation...