Wow! This is brilliant!

Wow... it’s creepy good!

Amazing entry.

I got this link from Tumblr and OMG THIS STORY DID NOT DISAPPOINT
thank you for your amazing work!
I wonder if it would be at all possible to expand on this from the beginning, ya know? Cuz I have so many questions and am FANGIRLING SO HARD

Brilliant

This would be a good story to expand on. There’s lots of different paths you could take with it.

I don't care how morbid it is; this is a piece of art!

Oh no no no! That can't be the end! This was so good! I swear when I was reading New Moon I was picturing this happening to Bella after Edward left her! You have bought my vision to life and it is fabulous! Love love loved this!

Holy shit I wish it was more to this so I can read when she finally gets her revenge. What a bunch of presumptive assholes the cullens minus rosalie are to not kill her outright but to keep her as a damn prisoner like where did they get off and how long was this suppose to go on they are so dumb.

Oh, my, so dark. Love it

Omg this was awesome! This was so fucking good! I love everything on this tale! The reason, the feelings, the "no choice " background... I just want an epilogue to see the revenge!

Awesome

Oh wow this is just a new level of Bella. She already had lost all of her marbles that even their venom couldn't fix it. I read the Sookie Stakehouse novels (HBO True Blood) and they had one of the millions things I wished they included in the show was vampire Elvis Presley. He was barely alive when a vamp fan found him and with all the chemicals and drugs in his system, when he transition he was the only vamp with mental disabilities even if their blood had healing abilities. I think this was the case with Bella, the chemicals in her brain were inreparable and the venim only enhance them. I like it how it end and think the Cullens are gone but I don't know maybe add a bit more there of where is bella now? You know for figure reference! Great story.

Horribly good.

Amazing!