Reviews for new ways to fall apart |
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![]() ![]() ![]() this story is love. you are brilliant! |
![]() ![]() omg this is so beautiful and sad... love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() How is it possible that I haven't review this? Such lovely, in a sad way, story. I like your style; it flows yet not too flowery and i like how you portray Ichigo even in his grief still somehow fights and realized he still have his pride somewhere. That bit is ever really. It does sound very Ichigo-like. I also appreciate how unsappy this is, it seems more real this way. Which makes it even sadder reading it. Thanks for sharing your work with us. |
![]() ![]() Brilliant writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Beautiful. Very and still. I'm a bit guilty for stumbling upon this piece of yours a few months and not reviewing the first time, the second time, and the many times I've read this that I have actually lost count of it all and it still delivers quite a pang to my heart. You and this story (and maybe even Ichigo) deserves more love than what I can give you :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was good, really good but next time, it might be better to involve more dialogues since it makes it more interesting. I really like the fact that you used second person, it's an idea I might steal; hope you don't mind! I think you really captured Ichigo's feelings well and were able to deliver them beautifully. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh,God. That was amazing! I have no other words to tell you how amazing that was. I loved it! Great job! |
![]() ![]() honestly this made me so sad you wrote it so beautifully hats off to you |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is beautiful.. *eyes sparkling cuz of the story* It's a heart warming & clenching story! Waaaa! IchiRuki 4ever! :D |
![]() ![]() This was beautiful and made me cry. I love it. :) |
![]() ![]() There aren't many oneshots that I come across that I like. But you were able to fit a lot of story into a short oneshot. I did feel Ichigo was sad, lonely and somewhat confused in this story. But this story really came together nicely and it ended nicely. It wasn't those type of oneshot that left me thinking that is it. Really good. I should check out what else you wrote. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story! You did a fantastic job with 2nd Person POV, which can prove difficult to do :) |
![]() ![]() Oh God...just...beautiful T.T |
![]() ![]() ouch...u hurt me too...tq |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice adaptation of the missing link! |