The dialogue is so good...

I congratulate you.
You just have completely persuade me that this couple can be actually very very cute.
( I aways liked Gokudera X Tsuna) but THIS was just beautiful, that words can't explain it.
Yamamotos thoughts were just...wow... filled with so much love, and the storyline is perfect the way it is.
I hope you will someday write an extended fic from these two, I would gladly read this.
I think you really have talent, keep up the good work.

FEELS LIKE IT NEEDS ANOTHER CHAPTER.

This was absolutely beautiful. I love the way you describe the touches, the tension and longing along with the situation and you established Yamamoto's emotions perfectly. This was really amazing!

It was... I have no words. It's exactly what this pairing embodies. That is all

That's beautiful. Wow just wow.