Yoyo this is awesome!

I thought Keele's attitudes were a bit too much..but it's hard to say. I'm left wondering, was he just not that abrasive in the game, or did he just not have the screen time to explore it?

Also, I really enjoyed the almost 3 tensions between them xD, but I think it's really appropriate you didn't go there, because although Keele X Meredy Awesome, idk if emotionally Meredy is at the level for a romantic type of relationship.

I really really love Eternia and I had a fun, nostalgic time reading this xD.

Thank you!

People read things! I thought this was an interesting ficlet! Very cute. And nice attention to detail! :)

Great story. I think it's actually better that you wrote the story so it didn't NEED a kissing scene. Very rarely do I see a fan fiction without even two seconds devoted to a kiss. You really kept the suspense high, though, and that made it enjoyable. Looking forward to more of your stories!

Hello:) Hence my username, you can see that i'm a really big fan of Tales of Eternia! And i really love this couple because i believe they complete each other, with the bubbliness and carefree personality of Meredy and the curious and skeptical personality of Keele i think they balance each other out; and it was great to see you explain that about them, with the black and white vision of Keele and the shades of gray vision of Meredy. I think they were mostly in character, i didn't feel anything bother me about that so congrats about that:D

Also i like that there wasn't a kiss in this. Because this was the first time that they had shared a memory of their past to each other and basically trust each other, both of them breaking their walls; that it would be too soon for a kiss. Trusting someone and developing a relationship is like one step at a time, and with a kiss it would've seemed too rushed, in my opinion. :)

But I absolutely love your story, it was one of the best one-shot fanfics i've ever read and it made me feel all warm inside3 Keep writing because you've got a nice way around words3

I really can't put my feelings in words except for the word: wow...
Your story was simply awesome.
I have read it before but did not find the time to review it, but now I had to search for your fanfic to give it the deserved review :)
Your writing style and the idea with the flute, it was a good combination and I really enjoyed reading it (I was so fixated on the story that I must admit, that I did not care for any mistakes)
I had hoped for a kiss but I think that the whole concept was already beautiful enough even without a kiss.
Great work and I hope you continue writing, because you got talent!

Have a nice day and thank you for sharing your beautiful story with us :)
Your FMC