I just found your story and it's amazing! But I did notice that it's been 2 years since there was an update. Are you still writting or have you abandoned it?

I love re-reading this and I still wish to see an update, especially to learn more about how your Shepard can be part asari without actually being asari. But I realise that new additions to the family take priority so I wish you all the best and wait in hope that you have the time and inclination to add more.

Really love this story and hope you haven't abandoned it.

Really enjoying this story so far hope you havent abandoned it would love to see where you take this! Xo

Really enjoyed reading this! I like what changes you've made.

This story is amazing! I have been hooked sinse ch.1 and the more I read the more entranced I became! I can't wait to see where you go with this and I love all the little twists you put in it, I love a good mystery. So don't keep all your adoring fans waiting too long and please update soon.

Darn it! You left us hanging at the good part! Evil! Mean!... Awesome... I love this story, I can't get enough of it and there are so many mysteries... I Love It! Please update soon.

Funny and amazingly written, I commend you. I've always liked that sweet relationship between Kaiden and Shepard; even if they never got involved in ME1, it was good to see them build up trust, etc. Anyway, really hope you continue - I'm loving this so far :D

...Alas poor Jenkins... At least this way he has a noble death.

On the other hand... YAY! Ash doesn't die. Nihlus though, well he better hope he can hide from Wrex, which is unlikely. Maybe he's a fast enough talker.

In this story? Shepard and Kaidan.
In ME1-ME3? Kaidan/Shepard - Love , ME1 Squadmates - Like , ME2 new squadmates - So so , ME3 new squadmates - don't care about them (Except Toothbrush girl Samantha Traynor).

Great chapter as always.
It's short but It's great to see Kaid/Shep love affection.
(Still bitter about that they cut their romance from the first game. Thank god for the PC version and mod!)

Favorite Character might have to be Samara. It would be awesome to have bioware come out with her life story somehow. Or let me play it as a game. She is so amazing in all she does, and her dedication to the justicar code fascinates me to no end.

Another great chapters as always! Though I read it way to fast. XD

Hi Shen, thanks for this update also. :)

I liked how you keept the augement between John and Wrex. :)

I think my fav character would have to be Kaidan, he's a nice and smart person a great fighter too,
someone that would be handy having at your back and he looks good and has a sexy accent too lol.

Cya. :)

i follow this story.
i like your choise of story and pg.

I still follow this! I'm just slow at getting around to reading chapters when they come out sometimes. XD We all gotta have lives I suppose.

i'm still following this too. :) I wait for this by re-read WOH like a million times now.
Great chapter but a little too short. (oh.. the wait. not enough mshenko.)
And finally virmire… I’m ready for it!