Yey, fluff! This one is a well written story. Thank for taking time to bring it to life.

Lily is in Slytherin...yuck! yuck! yuck!

I love how you've made him shy here, most authors write him as either a jerk or a man- well, you know. It's nice to see a Scorpius that isn't hung up on himself or all the girls in Hogwarts.

Very nice job,
Silver

Really enjoyed the story. Thanks!

You don't normally see a shy Scorpius or a Ravenclaw one. It's nice to see another take on his character.

I totally loved it! Fabulous writing! and my favorite part was -Lily laughed and tugged his scarf from her throat, looping it around his neck instead and using it to draw him in. "Too fast, huh?- really all of it was my favorite...but still love that scene.

Ok, I just absolutely love how you portrayed Scorpius in a way that I haven't really seen on here before. I'm always looking for new ways to write characters (I haven't been posting a lot lately as I haven't been too happy with the outcome of the efforts..) and I always love it when other people pull it off so well!

Not to mention that I really do love Scorpius and Lily together and there doesn't seem to be enough of them on here.. (I am, sad to admit, in part responsible for that having posted a Rose/Scorpius oneshot myself.. But! I did counter that with two of Scorpius and Lily, so ha!)

But fantastically well done! I loved it!

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww!

This is a cute take on Scorpius! And I like how you wrote Rose too!I can love how they're friends, but not together. Scor should just be with Lily!

You should write a multi-fic from this!

:)

DarkC

awww that was cute...u should write a sequal to that...and even I'm sorta confused is she a gryffindor or a slytherin?

Enjoyed reading this story very much. I like the shy Scorpius, it's a nice change from the player he is generally portrayed as.

I'm usually not the type of girl to go 'Aww' or anything. But this story was so cute, so I can't resist! I love the way you characterized Lily and Scorpius, it's different. I mean that in a good way of course xD.

Can't wait to read more from you!

So amazing. I loved it. A very unique story from how both characters are usually portrayed which I really enjoyed. Different and good. :)

What a wonderfully sweet and funy story, i hope you write more for this pairing