Please please please please write more. I wanna read about their wedding, and their honeymoon, and how Ozai turned to the way he is. This is so goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood!

Love the story! Please update soon, now following!

PLEASE UPDATE!

I think your a great writer. You have balance not to much romance to where its weird,but just enough to make it perfect. I reall love the fact that somebody else love these two as much as I do so I thank you for a great read . Oh by the way when's the next chapter? I really can't wait !

ERMAHGERD you write so awesomely. Your style is so mature and fluid and exciting and i wish more authors wrote like this! I have only recently stumbled across urzai but I LIKE IT and lovely fics like this make me love it more! Well done! also, that kiss scene was like the best, and in the AN with the "he stuck his tongue in her mouth and their tongues battled for dominance" I seriously lol'd, cuz that is soo so true. Like seriously every kiss scene has to include the word "dominance" somewhere hahaha so i really really liked that scene. WELL DONE my NEW FAVE STORY

please hurrry and update
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Aw, that was perfect. I love your Urzai writings. :)

That was, I believe, the best kiss scene I've ever read. And the Agni Kai was wonderfully written as well.

Oh, this is so good. I suddenly am a huge Urzai fan. I can't wait to read more!

Omg, this is getting good! Can u plz update? It's been forever! And it's finally getting good! Pleasssseeee?

Wow! I really like your story. Please continue it. Pleassee? I'd really appreciate it. Thankss

Hey there! Well, I did read your chapter a while back and I must compliment you on some aspects of your writing in general. Firstly, your description of actions and movement is always spot on. They are very good, and consistantly so. I always appreciate small detail like that (i.e. the bouncing of Ursa's foot, her settling into the cushions). That is good writing, period. Your description of the palace could use a bit more work, though. Don't be afraid to state some things explicitly. Overall, and again, I don't know why, this was not my favorite chapter. But I noticed that you, too, notice where your weak points are and that's very cool of you. It started losing its momentum when it should have been climaxing (during the wedding). And Ursa and Ozai both seemed very OOC, in my opinion. Also, Ursa's parents not being present or at least seen during the actual ceremony was noticable and odd. The same goes for Ozai's family...or at least Iroh. If your story is to be canon with ATLA, you must start developing Ursa's relationship with Iroh, since he is the one Ursa entrusted with Roku's headpiece before her banishment. Again, I still believe that no one knew Ursa was related to Roku, and avoiding the subject is like walking on egg shells the entire fic! Iroh DOES get the headpiece from Ursa, however you decide to do it, so I am excited to see how you work it into your story! This is still by far my favorite Urzai. BY FAR. Which is why I care about it so much. The wedding could have been better, more emotional, and very intresting. But I am sensing that the wedlock and inter-family relationship (Firenation vs. Avatar conflict/Sozin vs. Roku conflict/Ursa vs. her two worlds conflict) is not the meat of your story, so that's just fine. Just know how much an emphasis on those themes could truly enhance the Oma and Shu (Romeo and Juliet) romance between the prince of the Firenation and the Avatar's granddaughter. Can't wait for your next chapter!

Wow. Just, wow. I never really thought about the Ozai/Ursa pairing.
And just wondering, but are you going to explain your bersion of how Ursa died? Warching Avatar, that part always confused me.
UPDATE PLEASE!

Love the wedding. Can't wait for the next chapter. Will the next chapter jump to when Ursa is pregnat og giving birth to Zuko? Please update soon.

Aww I thought it was cute. I liked reading it x)