Good job!

It's solemn, not sollum.

Crescendo, not crishindo.

It's Colonel, not Kernal.

Um, actually it's April 14th, not April 15th.

yours was the first s tory i read on fan fiction long ago. just decided to revisit it for a second time. still a wonderful tale.

great story

i love this story! Thank you for not killing Erik and Christine off :)

You were right when you recommended this to me! I absolutely lived this. It has everything from tragedy to love and tradegy always makes the best stories. What is ironic is just after I finished reading this, the 1997 film of Titanic came on. The story of Titanic IS very tragedic so it's good to see that you have written this with a happy ending :)

Thank you for writing this awesome story! I really do hope that you can finish your other stories too.
I also love titanic. I jut dunno why it had to sink. Well. Anyways, Christine and Erik both have their happy ending now. That's good.

I must say, I usually don't give first person stories even a second glance but this is extremely well written and I'm highly enjoying it. _ Theres jut one little thing I'm a bit confused about. Is Erik deformed or wearing the mask at all? Since you haven't described it I'm jut a tad confused. Amazing story, and I'm excited to read more. _

This should be rated as T

why a miscarage why not add a baby why

Sad she couldn't have any more children but at least she's happy :)

Congragulations in finally finishing a story. I enjoyed this one and I hope to be hearing more from you soon!