Reviews for Saimin no Jutsu
Spidersauce chapter 2 . 12/14/2019
I know it isn't the point of the story . . . but having him cower in fear? Would have been dead without that jutsu?
No, Naruto can kick Sakura's ass. If he doesn't LET her hit him she physically can't . . . Wow Naruto is a pussy
Fanfic9000 chapter 4 . 7/24/2019
Cock-sama, that killed me hahaha
Borello chapter 13 . 8/25/2018
damnit. the story is really good and i hoped to read more chapter. i would like to read more chapter and how get in naruto's harem.
Zack Ultima chapter 1 . 8/4/2018
DUDE YOU ARE A GOOD DAME POEAT
benjamin chapter 13 . 2/22/2018
continualo sabes seria genial incluir a isarabi la del kaimar siendo capaz de tranformarse y todo con naruto seria genial que tsunade solo logre curarla de modo que parezca una humana normal con la diferencia de poder transformarse a voluntad
Kyrie Akat chapter 2 . 12/17/2017
Just because Sakura didn't like Naruto and was rude means they rape her and make her their slave? Makes sense (Sarcasm)
NerdsAlterEgo chapter 12 . 9/1/2017
Code Geass Naruto style.
Rock lee chapter 13 . 8/1/2017
That sand coffin the size of the leaf village sounds dope
Rock lee chapter 11 . 8/1/2017
End it with a free for all between all the harems after they all get jealous because they feel Naruto enjoys either ten ten or hinata more then the rest and they all die when the 9 tails loses control out of pure rage
Rock lee chapter 7 . 7/30/2017
I love the story when it's just Naruto and hinata. All the harem shit and 5 wives kinda ruins it.
Rock lee chapter 3 . 7/30/2017
That actually made me sad when Naruto hurt sakura
bloodbourne chapter 13 . 6/23/2017
When is the next chapter bro?!
Guest chapter 7 . 3/4/2017
Awesome Omake!
xiaomaome101Gmail.com chapter 1 . 2/12/2017
Is it abandoned?
Percx chapter 1 . 12/13/2016
Well...
it's not a bad smut fic, obviously the plot isn't as deep as others smut ones. It's well written, some grammar and spelling errors here and there but it's still quite enjoyable.
The story is a bit rushed and some events are hardly believeable although it goes well with the thematic of the story.
Strange that it doesn't have over 500 reviews while others fics are over it in 6-7 chapters without being necessarily good.
The length of the chapters is something really good as well as it's enjoyable.
The character development is quite strange but nonetheless funny to read and interesting

Personal opinion
- People don't care about Iruka-Shino or Sasuke in a Naruto harem fics since that's why we specifically search Naruto alone in the filters plus this is one of those " what if " stories not a " alternate universe" so the scene between Karin and Sasuke was totally would never touch her. As Naruto wouldn't even teach a girl if it wasn't because if the Saimin no Jutsu.
Iruka and Suzume wasn't that bad since it could have been possible that Iruka had a secret love cause we don't know almost nothing about him.
But Shino and the girls of the brothel was unbelievable, not even in a long lost parallel world that would , Shino is shy but definitely not stupid so he should have not mistake the brothel for another place
-Ino and Sakura being engaged while still being in Naruto' harem is quite disturbing for me at least. Didn't know they could be THAT lesbian. I honestly think that in a man harem either the girl really loves the Mc( Naruto )over everyone else or not so if it's the latter case then she can perfectly get out of it.
-Ino' s forming a Harem ? Like Wtf? Totally out of place. She's not the one on the CRA. It would make absolute no sense whatsoever. Plus she wants guys as well? No please I'm out of here
-The girls being clans heads of their respective clans doesn't mean their children with Naruto will get the mother's surname. As it has been shown on the canon story. Plus Naruto is the only male survivor of the Uzumaki clan and in you story also the Namikaze clan so he should have priority over children. There are plenty of Yamanaka and Hyuuga main branch children and most of them can take over the head clan position. While Naruto is alone, it would be stupid if they aren't name after his father's surname since he's gonna become Hokage and a important clan head of 2 Clans. So in my opinion they should all be Namikaze or Uzumaki, it makes much more sense.
-So much lesbians in this fic tho, right now there are like 3 couples, you should reconsider that not because they have orgies or kiss passionately or fight twice in their while life they are magically going to become lesbian or almost ( and Tenten)
-The girls from the Naruto Fan Club in my opinion were the most fun to read and I throughly enjoy it till the end .( the chapter ) But as well there is a lesbian couple, that's getting annoying, I think and hope that they all will be Naruto's wives in the future, obviously you would have to write more events to bond them even more.
Though I was a bit disappointed when Machiko and Yuna didn't get their Naruto time alone. They seem to have potential for a much more development. Try adding more unknown ninja or civilian girls they are mysterious and interested to read.
-Anko and Kurenai reactions were a bit strange but I had fun reading their interactions. Much more potential to girls are the way, the civilian girl Asuma cheated Kurenai with could be in Naruto's harem as a kind of revenge, that would be awesome.
-Naruto should be more dominant sometimes and not just in bed, he's gonna be a head clan and his future wives can't be ordering him around.
-In the future all the girls should move to the Namikaze Mansion including Ino and Sakura

Conclusion :
Great fic with a lot of potential , you should rewrite it to pulish some things and add anothers.
Really good smut story with a great length for each chapter.
I truly enjoyed it till the end
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