Holy sh!t my heart
I can't
But
Wow

this is fantastic!

Aww...this was such a sweet story. The only complaint I have (don't take this seriously) is Vegeta not softening up for Homura much. And no Homura x Vegeta. Apart from that, this story is amazing.

Only complaint, Homura didn't wear the Freiza force armor.

His son is 5 why does he care more about homura than him XD

Please make a sequel to this story following the Android/Cell saga. It would be amazing to see Homura React to Vegeta f#$king everyone over by letting Cell Achieve his perfect form. And just everyone's reaction to Cell in general. My biggest problem with this Fanfic though is the power scaling, I'm sorry dude but if this ever did happen, Frieza would've snapped Homura like a twig at the drop of a hat. Seriously the magical girls are not on the same level as a DBZ character, and you can't convince me otherwise. Other then that the ending was just beautiful, and it has proper closure for Houmura, proper CLOUSURE for Homura! (glares at Rebellion). Sorry I just, really f#$king hate Rebellion. This Fanfic gets a 9/10 menaing great.

I find the whole ending hilarious in hindsight, considering what will happen later with DB Super (unless this timeline branches into GT events). All these gods above gods, other universes and Zeno. Y'know, Beerus might just allow Madoka to give him a pet scratch, cause Madoka is a cat person and Beerus is definitely a cat.

Oh yeah also Rebellion was released few months after this got finished. I got kinda reminded of it. *inhale* BOI

OMFG I didn't recognize you as the writer of YGO Shipping Challenge fanfiction. Greetings, fellow YGO fan!

Btw amazing story, so far one of the heaviest crossover fic I have ever read, on par or even surpassing "History Of A Teacher" (Harry Potter x YU-GI-OH!) if I may say. As YGO fan I recommended you to read it.

Now back to this fic. The interaction between Vegeta and Akemi Homura is sweet and wonderful, if only Akemi isn't so in love with Madoka, I could imagine she had a thing or two with Vegeta (Akemi was mentally 24 or older, so it would be okay).

The ending was also beautiful, Vegeta still being a tough speaking tsundere like always, but he was more focused and less likely commit mistakes he had done in CELL SAGA canon storyline.

Prior to reading this fic, I could never think of a DBZxPMMM crossover, after reading this fic, I can never stop thinking of them. Awesome read!

This is one of the most beautiful works I have ever read. You nailed Vegeta down right to the wall with how you characterized him, made a crossover that normally would not work into a masterpiece, scaled powers effectively, made the message clear, and kept a consistent pace throughout the entire story. I genuinely recommend you write more.

I can't explain why I love this story. Puella Magi and Dragon Ball are the antithesis, but you wrote something incredibly fitting with the spirits of both shows.
The relationship between Homura and Vegeta is beautiful and realistic: Vegeta STARTS to become a good person after her death, realising the lose of his first true friend.
Also, Kyoko's death scene is really heartbreaking (I think mostly because she is my favourite PMMM's character).
I can't wait for the sequel (it'll be a sort of "Rebellion Story" mixed with The Android Saga? Or something else?)! You're great!
See ya!

The moment I read finished reading the first chapter, I knew I was hooked. I binge-read the entire 'fic and was very satisfied with the ending.
One of my biggest compliments would have to be that you balanced the power scales between these two universes very well. Homura's utilty-centered power often makes a straggler against powerful opponents, no matter how confident she may act outwardly. The action scenes were clever and not simply power vs power. Homura's weapons were largely useful on the first few enemies but quickly became useless in favor of magical attacks against overwhelmingly powerful beings, which is exactly what we in the Puella Magi anime (Dragon Ball Z aswell, come to think of it).
Something that also caught my attention was how much detail you put into describing the characters' thoughts and feelings; most fanfic writers would take the easy/lazy route and and give insufficient, three-word phrases to expound upon nausea, pain, heartache etc.
Lastly, the personalities and character development of our two main protagonists was very tastefully done; Homura is in truth, a very sentimental person and you captured that side of her splendidly. Vegeta is stubborn and that characteristic can be both positive and negative; something we saw play a very large role in this story. Homura's realization of her self-conflict and Vegeta begrudgingly burgeoning friendship with her allowed the readers to identify with a character who is not always honest with himself in regards to compassion.
I'll honest have to re-read this sometime. Sorry for the literal wall of text. Really though, fantastic job!

Wow Madoka's witch really has no clue what she is potentially fucking with does she? Wonder what would happen if she messed with Beerus?

I love the last line, powerful

Nice you captured kyoko's character very well!