Total shit fic

I just couldn't read to the end because Naruto was so pathetic like really his so FUCKING weak it's pitiful, he could have trained himself easily but no like WTF that's not Naruto at all

"Sasuke, I know this is going to be hard for you but you need to win over this disability to speak. Come on, practice makes perfect."

GOT ME LAUGHING SO HARD I MIGHT FALL ON MY ASS. NICE ONE KAKASHI

Undated please

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Kinda disappointing that there's no more, since it was a wonderful read. The only problem that I really had was that the "dream" scenes seemed to just cut off. Felt like you didn't really know how to transition from them after Inori stopped murdering Naruto.
Will add the story to alert in case you ever decide to continue it.

Yeah no Naruto wouldn't give up on his dreams for some one-dimensional waifu trash with no personality.

I do hope you continue this. This fic nabbed my attention when I started reading through it.

Great fanfiction

pls update i love this awesome story

Hope you update this again soon. It's pretty good

I just wanted to say the kings power doesn't have to be in contact for someone to activate it. It can activate as long as it already has a copy of said weapon. For example the bipolar gloves were already used once, so it has been copied. It should only be deleted when the copy breaks.

Please update this story of yours. I really Enjoy reading it. I want to read more on naruto and his family interaction as well as inori . Please update

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I thought that this was a pretty damn amazing chapter you've written here. I'm really looking forward to seeing the other OC voids that you end up creating for this story. Though I do have two or three questions after seeing the void database here at the end of the chapter.
First I'm a bit curious as to the over all differences in strength that a void might have depending on the person it comes from. What I mean is would a void that comes from a trained shinobi actually be more powerful than one from a random bandit, or even a civilian? I mean from what I understand voids are weapons based off of aspects of a persons emotions, personality, behaviour, etc. In a sense they are parts of a persons soul, or rather they are weapons made up by and that represent the form of a persons soul. However, just because a person is a civilian and thus has no fighting skills, does that mean a void which comes from them would be weaker with the possible rare exception, as opposed to someone with combat training, and even more so with shinobi as the skill and strength of them goes up?
Second if the first question I asked is true and the voids do tend to be more powerful as the overall power and skill of the shinobi they come from is higher. Than does that also mean that the weapon abilities, weapon strength, weight, size, and even the physical appearance of the weapon itself can change as the individual it comes from gets weaker or stronger and/or aspects of their personality, emotions, behaviour, etc, change with the passage of time?
Third and final question I have is actually about the skills Naruto may or may not learn later on. I was wondering what sort of techniques Naruto might end up learning? I mean don't get me wrong, I think that his ability to use those void weapons is pretty damn useful if he gets a weapon that he can use and suited to the situation, not only that but regardless he can use it no matter where or who he is fighting against since he can acquire a weapon from anyone. At the same time however, that skill has three very devastating weaknesses. The first is that until Naruto reaches a certain skill level or certain events happen, every time he removes a void from an ally they end up passing out and being left vulnerable. Second is that Naruto has to make some form of eye contact or his target has to believe he is making eye contact with them to have the opportunity to acquire a void from them. The third and greatest weakness is that if Naruto is trying to get a weapon from his enemy he still has to get close enough to reach into them and grab that weapon. Not very many individuals are going to let him get that close willingly.
As such I was wondering what other sorts of techniques Naruto is likely to acquire to aid him if he's unable to rely upon a void weapon? At any rate I'm looking forward to seeing you update this story again, soon I hope, as it's by far the best Naruto and Guilty Crown cross over I've read on this site.