Thank you for sharing this story.

Beautiful, and absolutely heartbreaking.
"Our hearts made a deal to belong to each other before our minds knew what to make of it all."

Beautifully writen

This . Ruined . Me
my emotions were all over . I cried, I laughed , and wished I was Katniss for a few moments. Seriously truly exceptional quality writing. PLEASE WRITE MORE FANFICTION YOURE TOTALLY MY FAV!

This was a great story.

This was soo perfect! So sweet and adorable and exactly how I want their first time to be. I loved that they talked a lot and opened up their hearts.

I liked this story and then I LOVED this story all because of 4 simple lines. I know that someone else commented on them as well, but I just felt the need to reiterate the beauty of them.

"I feel like I have two hearts, and maybe I do. Maybe this is what happened somewhere along the line, on the train or carried in the wind between our two houses. Our hearts made a deal to belong to each others before our minds knew what to make of it all. Maybe we always knew that only one of us could ever really make it, and our hearts were just waiting to find out which body gets to keep them."

Very rarely do you come across words that are so moving that you find yourself committing them to memory because their resonance carries so much weight. These short lines are singlehandedly the greatest summation of their love for each other that I've read before. I think many of us wish that Katniss had come to this kind of realization much earlier than she does in the novels, but then the loveliness of this kind of unguarded moment might have been lost.

I really hope you'll consider writing more. I really enjoy your stories, and it's not even due to their sexual nature, because I don't consider them to be gratuitous. I enjoy the emotion you put in your stories. Please write more!

Excellent. In-character perfection.

This is so beautiful. You captured their characters so perfectly, and it was so believable, and heartbreaking yet heartwarming at the same time 3 This is my favorite hunger games fanfic that I have ever read, and trust me... I have read a lot. Thank you for making my day. Going to read this many times over.

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i cry i cry

Oh my god this... I am bowled over.

Katniss' thoughts about joined hearts tore at my emotions. Especially "Maybe we always knew that only one of us could ever really make it, and our hearts are just waiting to find out which body gets to keep them." And then her thought that whomever dies will take both hearts. My god that was beautiful and poetic and unbearably sad.

You did an amazing job on this fic! Everything felt so in character and realistic for them. Great work.

I can't believe I haven't found this story until now. It's fantastic. Thank you.

This was AMAZING!