I really enjoy your writing. I have quite the colorful imagination and have already decided what is going to happen next, but I would LOVE to read what you had in mind. A second chapter would be much appreciated.

*hugs* You should be so proud of yourself, you're almost done and have made it through all of the things they've thrown at you! Is your housemate alive, if so, then pat yourself on the back because its a testament on your restraint. She should NEVER have done that to your laptop...you're stories and friends are there. :)

Oh this was so sweet! I must confess that I haven't seen the episode yet, but it sounded like it was awesome! I was thrown that Lee, The Man, Majors was in it! Ah, one of Lindsay's most difficult things to do, telling a family that their daughter had died. It sounds like she did it with grace, I'm glad that she had this opportunity to show that she cares about the victim just as much as anyone there. The image of Lucy all grown up makes my heart sad because it would be too soon! Anytime we can see Danny cuddling with Lucy waiting for Lindsay to come home is good for me!

One thing that I found funny in here is that this sounds a lot like Forbidden Fruit. To lose a loved one that you hoped to love for the rest of your life...Danny and Lindsay will always be lucky in that regard that they got a second chance together. All because of that little girl in bed with them. There are no lines that I can highlight they are all perfection! More please!

Hi laurzz, good to see you back and the new episode, i got the same feeling as you when i watched the interrogation scene, the facial expression of Carmine just suddenly became difference when he heard the Harlen said he love Jessica!

And I can tell you what your roomate does is absolutely wrong! I'm really sorry to loss all your those hard work! Just hope we can have your other updates when you have time to write again...i'll keep my finger crossed :)

that was so cute like always.

Saderia

please make a second chapter, my imagination is horrible! But i LOVED it! :)

Yay! We got a new episode and a post episode story. This is great, Danny and Lucy cuddle time and a sweet talk between danny and Lindsay. We need another chapter.

I could feel Lindsay and Danny thinking "OMG what if it was our daughter who was killed by a suppose best friend." when dealing with Jessica's murder. This was a really sweet family story.

So glad CSI NY and your post Ep are BACK that was so sweet and fantatic please do a second chapter

This was great. I loved the episode because it had good moments with just about everyone. We really need a family scene on the show like the one you had here. I want to see parents Lindsay and Danny as well as great CSIs.

Second chapter? Of course we want a second chapter.

Sorry about your stories. I hope you growled really menacingly at your housemate. What grade/subject are you hoping to teach?

i love this story it would be good if you could write another chapter

Wasn't it great to finally get a new episode, and a nice Danny/Lindsay scene too? Now if the show would just give us a glimpse of Lucy. I always look forward to your post-episode takes and this one was great as always!

I missed your post-eps, so I'm glad the show is back so you can write again. This was really good. I was watching the interrogation scene and Danny's face during it kind of broke my heart a little, so I'm glad you included that because I thought it would be good in a post-ep.

This was really great. I love that you had Lindsay make the connection with the parents and that she's stayed around to do so. Also Danny's cuddling with Lucy and all of that. Loved it!

AAAWWWW! (can I just say its fun to watch with each letter I type, the number gets smaller and smaller of how many letters I can type?)

I digress!

YOU'RE BAAAACK! Boom Shaka laka! Now you can never leave again, unless you want too. Then you can. :D

Anyways, LOVE this story :)

My imagination isn't working at the moment, so it would awesome, if you could write a second chapter to maybe get it back on track!xD

Great story, like always, by the way!:)))