| Reviews for Be More Careful, Okay? |
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  derekctomlinson chapter 1 . 5/2 astrid smirking at her boyfriend hiccup haddock hey if i ever see you cliffdiving i will skin you alive |
| derek chapter 1 . 8/18/2018 hiccup had better not go cliffdiving without toothless or astrid will go to odin and ask for hiccup to be alive again so she can kill him herself |
 LoneMusician chapter 1 . 9/15/2014 Awww! I knew Astrid would say 'I love you'! I KNEW IT! SO CUTE! See what you did? Now I'm suffering from diabetes from how utterly sweet this was. :) |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/16/2014 Good job |
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/10/2014 Mmm... Most likely Astrid would be the one doing the cliff diving and doing dangerous stunts and tumbles... |
| Angryhenry chapter 1 . 1/28/2014 He he, lucky bigger I wish I was hiccup, not the most attractive, or the strongest. Yet accepted for who he is, and what he is done. Once the laughing stock became the glue that holds bark together |
| TAD chapter 1 . 1/3/2014 This story was ADORABLE! It gave me tingly feelings and...GAH! It's so cute! |
| roobaby2011 chapter 1 . 6/27/2013 Very Cute! |
| Frostbite Brandson chapter 1 . 4/20/2013 Haha, I love this |
| mikichii chapter 1 . 10/23/2012 i loved it so stinking much! |
| PrayerGirl chapter 1 . 10/5/2012 Cute! |
| MissingInAction chapter 1 . 7/24/2012 Holy Moley I love this story! |
| Cccrrraaazzzyyy chapter 1 . 6/21/2012 Wow! That was a cool move! This Fanfiction was very sweet...congrats who ever had this idea! Adding to favorites! Can you tell me who sent the request?:3 |
| The Storyologist chapter 1 . 3/27/2012 Very sweet my friend! :) Thank you for satisfying my craving for a Hiccup and Astrid fluff tonight! You captured their endearing awkwardness perfectly right there at the end. The "Wait... what? You love me?" had to be my favorite part. It's very much how they would both would react to those words :) The only thing that could have made this better for me is if you really expounded on the "Be more carefull" aspect of it. You portrayed Astrid as protective of Hiccup, which I love! It shows that she cares for him and wants what's best for him, which in my mind is not only very in character, but is the element that makes these two a beautiful, realistic teen romance (which we don't find very often these days). I kept expecting Astrid to appologize for being so difficult, then go on to explain how she much she cares about him and how she was so scared when the green death nearly killed him and how she never wants anything to hurt him . . . buuuuuut I'm a sap like that, so you don't have to listen to me. :) Anyway, good piece of fanfic. God bless and keep up the good work! -Story |
| CookiesxMilkEXCITEMe chapter 1 . 3/25/2012 Aw isn't that sweet. :) Lol I could imagine it being hard with Astrid... you know... being Astrid and having to say those three words, but they seemed sincere. :) -Saya |
