Good story. It ended off really well!

There were only two parts I had problems with. The first being when Bella first meets the Cullens and they’re against her, especially Carlisle not letting Alice and Bella talk at Edward’s word. Luckily, that was fixed in the next chapter with Alice visiting Bella in secret that night. The second being the end of the Maggie situation. I thought that she and Mathew would have been good together, especially as earlier it was mentioned that the reason Maggie liked Bella so much was because of her undying live and devotion to a ‘dead’ girl and that she wished for somebody to love her as much; that person could have easily been Mathew.

Lol Alice won't abandon the Cullens for her mate? Really? Do you not understand the whole mate bond or do you just disregard it. If you're writing in this genre shouldn't you respect it. It's explicitly stated with both Vampire and Wolf in this AU that both will die or go insane without their mate/imprint by the author. You weren't changing the rules in your fiction you were doing a different take but ignored all the guidelines of it. Pointless and annoying

It's a good story but Alice is an asshole and the last two chapters don't make up for that. This whole story she doubts Bella, disregards Bella and outright let's her family kick the shit out of her 'for training'. At no point in this fic have I ever thought Alice loves Bella. Alice loves Alice.

Damn, I wanted to get an update on the Ms. Moore situation lol

So glad the find each other’s again and will life for eternally together! Thank you for writing this amazing, badass, wonderful and brilliant Bellice masterpiece 333

I’m so glad

Bella is a cool sweetheart

Plot twisted! Bella is awesome humble over badass bae *claps

Awww sweet love babies

Omg

Poor Bella honey and Alice too

Sweet babies

Interesting hohohoho

Noooo what happend with the teacher ?

I'm discovering this story today, and it seems I can't stop reading it... I like how it's fluid, and intriguing... I know it will be difficult for the girls soon but I'm enamored by their relationship. thank you very much for sharing your story with us.