| Reviews for Ton Up |
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  Mirage chapter 17 . 3/23 I still like this story and would hope that one day you finish this story - |
 FluffyLuver4Eva chapter 1 . 2/1 Love this story. Read it on Archive, and enjoy it immensely. Thank you for being awesome ️ |
| I'm All Teeth chapter 17 . 7/27/2017 Ayumi is the best and I love her and i want nothing but good things for this kind and wonderful snowflake. I'm sorry it's been so long since you updated this, but I understand how life gets in the way and I'm so thankful that you shared as much of your wonderful writing with us as you did. Thank you. |
| I'm All Teeth chapter 15 . 7/27/2017 Hello! I know you're probably not reading these anymore, but in this chapter you mentioned Toyama and I'm just so excited that you did that! A lot of people don't know where it is and I've never seen it mentioned in fanfiction before! I mean, of course your descriptions of Hokkaido were really great and painted a very real picture and were very accurate but! Toyama! I'm just so excited I had to say something! Thank you so much! |
| danigirl52 chapter 17 . 5/5/2017 I love this story! I'm a fan of all your stories, tho I hope you do finish this one, there isn't another one I could find even like it, story line wise. It's 2017 now :( |
| Mirage chapter 17 . 5/14/2016 aww ...thats so sad that its the last chapter for such a long time...i realy do hope that you come back one day and write more chapters i want to see how she deals with this Spirit, what other youkai they will meet, maybe Sesshomaru, and they really Need to find Shippo...i mean he was her kit...that should mean something, but maybe he does not want to remember,...and how the learning of bike riding goes... will kagomes mother and kougas more or less foster mother in human world meet and i really cant wait to see cubs running around...and Ayumi should accept that she likes both guys and that they are wound around her Little finger i think its not bad for those three please come back one day and finish this story its 2016 |
| Mirage chapter 13 . 5/14/2016 aww...yes..for this moment in ch13 i did wait...he was to docile..he is an alpha wolf...sure he had years to gow up and become an adult...but she is the Person he wanted as mate...atleast somewhat his instinct told him too...and that his youkai did not show sooner is a surprise but that he did not mark her as his till now is a real surprise...maybe later. |
| Mirage chapter 7 . 5/12/2016 i really like ch7...so cute, they are so sweet, but try not to tell the other that they like each other... why did he become so shy to her |
| Mirage chapter 2 . 5/12/2016 great Story the bikes sweet him and his two friends well |
| rawrbooks chapter 10 . 4/26/2016 Such a good story! Please update soon, and thank you for writing! |
| roroiine chapter 17 . 12/23/2015 Update! Such a wonderful story, I really want to see where you take it! |
| M-Angel 05 chapter 17 . 8/20/2015 I hope you get to update this story soon. Loved it! |
| Carpathian Rose chapter 4 . 4/12/2015 YES! THERE is the Kouga I love! Teasing, being sexy about her panties. Lol. Love, love and love this! |
| Carpathian Rose chapter 3 . 4/12/2015 Oh my God, but I love this story! I about snorted whenkagome said Kouga was a friend of Inuyashas. Lol! |
| Carpathian Rose chapter 2 . 4/12/2015 Beautifully written. I love this! |
