Very good, way better ending than the actual one. You should make it so that Kanade marries Otanashi. Which would make then ending even better!

fantastic bro

I love it

This was a good way to end it. Nice imagination bruh.

The ending they all deserve

What I have to say about this story, in my honest opinion. I think it could have had more emotional moments like at the ending of episode 13, instead of like BAM! Otonashi meets Kanade and remembers her so easily, and when he runs into Hinata. Everything seemed to be so abrupt in this story. So, I did enjoy it but I think it could have more work to make it more descriptiv.

Thanks for this, this has really satisfied me since the ending in the anime was so sad. So once again thank you :)

What the heck was THAT?!
Alright- The story was good- they meet "BLAH BLAG BLAH!"
But it was too sooooon! Give it some time!
It's like this ABCDEFG... It's CONSECUTIVE!

Very nice but it seems kinda fast and needs a lil more feelings to it, otherwise it's good

That was so boring .

The story seemed rather rushed, but I still liked it. :) Good job

When i read "what happened...is that I accidentally break a baseball in her window." - Hinata, I'm like... Sure... But yet I loved this story

Makes everything okay in Angel Beats

... Needs a bit more feeling... it seem blank, just "they did this, they did that" Sorry if that gets you angry, but it's true..

lol i feel so bad for yui(i named one of my kittens after her) but seriously? Noda and Yuri? i dont mean to be a critic but you could be a bit better and put yuri with naoi or some1 else