the pace...too fast. and miku is too fragile. out of characterly fragile. luka is ok but miku...err...and miki's approach was too blunt. i also have a feeling miki have some feelings for luka. hm. but still, miku is too easily broken. her character needs some fixing

...

oh my god

fuck this

why

This is like, one of the best if not the best mikuxluka story i've read

why

what the fudge

at least let someone adopt this story :C

I was so happy

There was an awesome author who made awesome fanfics

then they quit

like what tha fudge

i h8 dis

why

why
why
why
why
why
why
why
why
why
why
why

fudge this

what the fuck

fuck myself

fuck me

damn me

Why :c

fuck you lucy

thank you police officer

fuck you lily

Also, wat tha hell. Author, why the fuck would a police raise a gun in front of a gay? If that's really how police are, then you'd see a police raising a gun in front of a person every goddamn day.

Wat da fuck, why
dats just too exaggerated

-ahem, dont worry author, im not hating it or looking at wat u did as a bad thing, just a bit... weirded out o.o

gr8 chappie m8, i r8 8/8. I cried again lmfao. for some reason your story keeps on making me cry. lmao

UPDATE SOON EVEN THO IM NOT AT THE LAST CHAPTER YET

bitch

that little bitch

you gonna kill miku?

ill kill you first you bitch

you belong in a mental asylum

SHIT

FUCK YOU LILY

FUCK YOU CRAZY WOMAN WHO DOESNT DESERVE TO BE LUKA'S MOTHER

The past few chapters made me cry e.e surprised about that cuz i dont normally cry easily.

anyway, luka's mother is a demon who deserves to go get tortured by demons. Little shitty biatch

oh my god

last time i saw this story, it was only chapter one. and now... damn.

I love this. and if its not completed yet, update soon even though im not at the last chapter yet lmao

Best teacher award goes to Meiko! Rather than helping Luka by addressing the bullying by Miku, She said "Have you ever tried distancing yourself from her?"...

Nice plot and the beginning was kinds... cliche. Don't worry, just a bit. Into the story you've built a better structure and begin to support two whippings. Try not to get carried away with the Gumi x Miki. After all this reading (actually I'm on chapter 8) you've had few mistakes but I can see why. No beta reader. Perfectly can understand. Great story, keep it up with your others. Peace!

This fic...what can I say...Luka cries so much in such inappropriate ways, yet magically returns to a sound state. This fic is unbelievable and I don't mean that in a good way.

Regrettably, this fic was rejected entry to the tvtropes dot org Vocaloid rec fics section. This is on you, you should have taken my advice. There's nothing I can do now.

Whaaaa? You still haven't changed the "I forgot what it was like to be human" part! How can I read this?

Luka is behaving like a drama queen! This story seriously moves too fast and shame on you for making sweet little Miku a bully! You clearly don't understand her character!

this was such a great story but you quit and that does make me sad and probably a couple of other people to so anyway, this and all the rest of your story's were fantastic. wish you were able to do more. i wasn't able to get attached to any other personalities that other story's had for luka and miku but i mean it was fun while it lasted. 3 for the great story's you wrote and i appreciate all the hard work you put into all of them.

bummer. It was the anniversary of this fic too when you quit. Sigh. Just when you were in the middle of it..

Oh my mother of
Goodness! •_• this was epic I fell seriously bad thou for miku and I really hope she's ok also I feel Bad for Luka too cause she had to leave her girlfriend for a while and witness her parents fight thou i must say totally
Awesome job and your fic is totally amazing(: