I understand why you took away Hermione forgiving nature but harry is just as forgiving as she is and besides the dursleys I could see that being a problem. How is harry supposed to go through Sirius last will when he is still alive.

do you have any idea how irritating it is to expect another chapter and get an author note

What happened with Dumbledore at Privet Drive?

How was Gringotts for Harry? Did the Goblins discover his parent’s unread will?

What’s Hermione doing?

I thank you for putting my father into this. You know he gets over looked a lot it's very offensive. And when you said, 'Fisrst things first' in chapter 3 are you an Imagine Dragons fan? I mean you could've put that even if you weren't but I just had to asked. Anyways, thank you for putting my father in and it's a great fanfic. Oh and read my fanfics and fictions on Quotev.

Counting Stars, NevilleAndNicoLover, Daughter of Pluto

Plz Finish it!

cant believe you really write “make love not war” when you write about all this sadistic gore shit ffs girllll

Make love not war u say? OK! Yo anyone know a hit chick I can bang?

Really would enjoy seeing more of this.

I hope you come back again

WWWWWOOOOOOOWWWWWW

YOU JUST REMINDED ME OF PERCY JACKSON

LUKE WAS THE TRAITOR WHO WAS SUPPOSEDLY PERCYS FRIEND HE STOLE THE LIGHTNING BOLT LITERALLY FUCKING HADES SON THAT SON OF A BITCH

Luke I mean, not percy, Luke the douchebag

think real life has sucked out all the time for writing so I believe this has been abandoned

I love this story pls don't tell me u have abandoned it. Pls update soon

Why did you stop this story is was really good and I like how Harry and Hermione took revenge on there parents-guardians and I hope you will continue this story soon as I want to see how Harry and Hermione take there revenge upon there enemies. I think that Harry and Hermione should begin to become stronger throughout fifth year but Voldemort shell act soon and begin to force images into Harry's mind as he tries to fight off the images with Luke's help as the dark power he gave him will help him to fight through Voldemort's images unfortunately it won't be enough to stop Voldemort. I think that Umbridge should come into this daring fifth year as Harry tries to prove Voldemort's return to the stubborn ministry who don't believe that Voldemort as returned Umbridge will torture Harry increasing his anger and hatred and allowing the devils power to flow into him faster which will help him in his fight in the ministry where Series dies. I think that Dumbledore should try to make sure he does not lose his pawn as that is all he see's Harry as he see's Harry's growing anger and hate he will know that someone most be channelling this dark power to Harry it can't be Voldemort so it most be someone else who maybe more powerful but first he most find the Horcruxes to stop Voldemort then he will deal with Harry. I think that Harry should begin to spy on his friends as he and Hermione aim to find out who can be trusted figuring there most be some true friends they have buy soon learn that only Luna was truly loyal to them all the rest serve Dumbledore helping him to make sure that Harry will die when the time is right. I think that Voldemort should also will the devils essence within Harry when he attempts to possess the boy only to be forced out by the Devils rage realising that Potter has allied with the devil he most be careful as he has read about the torture that the devil gives his prisoners and he most not become one of them.

very, very awesome fic so far!

PLEASE UPDATE SOON! (_)

Pls update I think u have a really good story going here