This is really good!

I liked it, I wish there was more but oh well. I really liked the plot and just everything about it. I love seeing the twins smarter than most people think they are. Some people just see them as pranksters but they're actually very intelligent and I love it how you showed it.

laughed through the whole thing. love it thank you.

I like the idea, but I have to admit the spelling errors are driving me crazy. Things like "Angle" instead of "Angel", "quiet" instead of "quite", "minuet" instead of "minute" and more. . . Then there's the punctuation, which sometimes I find either missing or misplaced in areas. For example, commas should go on the inside of quotation marks, like: "Say, brother of mine," George questioned, "Are you a banana?". . . I feel like I could enjoy this a lot more after it's been thoroughly and well read by a good BETA reader. I feel like, instead, this was barely proofread by the author and just spell-checked by the word processor before being posted.

Moving on from rookie errors like these, I absolutely love the idea of this story, like I've mentioned before. The idea that the twins, the infamous troublemakers, would mess with time and prank fate is something I warmed up to as soon as I finished reading the summary. Kudos to you for attempting this. It's a little early to say much about the plot, though I'm a bit concerned at the general lack of friendly concern between the twins and Harry. The twins are awesome, but they're also human, and it doesn't seem likely that they would be so aloof while their friend Harry (who even gave his winnings for their joke shop) seems to be suffering from a burnout. Not to mention, their sister should be involved in all this as well, so they came off as a bit uncaring in this prologue.

I will have to read the rest to see . . .

Liked this.

This was really good, I just wish there was more. :)

Hmmm, I liked it. I would be curious to see what happens next.

I like this what if story and hope that many have giving it good reviews !

The Crimson Mage.

This is great so far! Update soon!

awesome, thanks for making this :)

Love it!

:) Nice one Fred

AWESOME

SERIOUS! how awesome can they get?!

This is great! It's good how it is, but I would love it if you were to expand on it when you get time. :)

nice