Overall I liked this fanfic, but it was very frustrating to read, especially when the premise kept getting rehashed between characters.

Also, the lack of scene breaks makes things feel disjointed.

Ah, so Dudley’s daughter is a witch...️

“Obviously guilty person” Pff, we’ll see what you have to say after the trial, Crouch!

Very, very good story I love that you chose to do something positively different with Petunia & Vernon.
Thanks again,
G Smith

lol, I had a blast reading your story!

I’ve got to stop reading. Two Aurors casually using crucio? That is increasingly OOC. And then Sirius doesn’t even really have a reaction to it? It’s a torture curse and he just sighs? Am I reading a parody?

Interesting story idea, but it is getting rehashed too much with all the characters repeating the set up. Maybe in a future version, there could be a reason for them all to be together when they learn Black is getting a trial, so you can still see all the reactions without rehashing the premise.

Really interesting take on a way of freeing Sirius, I love how you made the Dursleys somewhat sympathetic without making them out of character at all!

I loved this story so much! I read it all at once because it was such a fun and interesting concept, and I'm glad you didn't bash Dumbledore or any of the other characters! Thank you for writing it!

Vernon didn't expect that to happen

I read your fic because of Robst’s mention of it in his Harry Crow story and I wanted to see the seed that started that novel.

Let me be blunt: Vernon Dursley was slime in HP Canon. He’s slime in most fanfics. But you actually made him more respectable than 90% of the wizard adults in 1981. That is impressive. Thank you for your work.

Now if you’ll excuse me, I’m off to see what else you have written to see if there is any other gems like this one.
JSX

while this is hilarious, I'm somewhat confused by how well Vernon is understanding and coping with magic, gringots, the goblins. I could believe that his stubborn hatred of magic and freaks got worse living with Harry for 11 years

Yay Vernon!

I hope Sirius never forgive those that tortured him nor that backstabbing Remus

Cute. Nice to see Vernon doing something useful for a change.

It’s scary to think of people who have the power to erase memories trying to manipulate witnesses. They could make Sirius believe he’s an Australian dentist if they wanted.