Reviews for A Father's Gift
Enforcer209 chapter 13 . 7/20
It’s such a shame that this story hasn’t been updated in such a long time it was quite interesting
Kiochii chapter 13 . 6/30
This is a great story!
Not to mention you give reasons for Narutos OP abilities. Not often you read a fic that shows his progression.
I hope you update this soon especially if you end up pairing him with Haku!
I adore stories where Haku survives and joins Konoha.
KidMidas chapter 13 . 6/9
ya know this is one of my favorite naruto fanfics which i guess is why i keep rereading it but i sooo wish there was more
Determination4296 chapter 13 . 3/21
good story i hope it continues
jennyBloom chapter 13 . 3/4
love this story please update with more chapters
Guest chapter 13 . 2/5
Keep going i like it very much!
Trevian Almanza chapter 13 . 2/3
Why did you stop writing it has a lot of potential and is astounding
Zenobien chapter 13 . 2/2
I was Lowkey disappointed when the bird co tract went to sasuke, but when Naruto got the dragon contract I was like damn thats one way to one up phoenix's. lmfao and nice with the names of the summons I caught that you named the phoenix after Suzakuu one of the four deity things from japanse culture
mariep87 chapter 13 . 8/20/2019
i love your story, can you continue it please!
miracleplayyyzsims chapter 13 . 8/17/2019
hey wheres the next chapter im hoping u could at least finish it up until the chunin exams
Currahee506 chapter 1 . 7/22/2019
The ball is called a BIJUUDAMA or tailed beast bomb even in the mangas
RyderPhenex chapter 5 . 5/9/2019
Huh! Naruto's jumpsuit is awesome and cool! not monstrosity you stupid meat bag.
spacekid96 chapter 13 . 4/26/2019
This is amazing. I hope you continue it someday.
percabethstarcoDannyandSam chapter 1 . 4/2/2019
This is really intelligent why didn’t anyone think of it before
Tenjo chapter 9 . 3/26/2019
Dropping this. He just keeps making mental leaps and solving issues for characters that haven’t actually arisen yet (like his advice for TenTen in the last chapter).. it’s boring. All you’re doing is setting up all of the main characters to be perfectly prepared, catered exactly for their future challenges.
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