OMG is all i can say! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO W ( in a VERY good way! *wink wink*) 3

If this is what you have for your first try, then I'm eager for your next stories. )

Convinced me to return to the fanfiction addiction. Enthralling storyline, dialogue was so believable that I could picture the scene perfectly, with accents included ;) Love to read more of your captivating stories, especially if Phai is mentioned ;) Sooo good, keep on writing :)

I loved this so much, you cannot belive it. The writting, the sotry it self, everything! Well done!

You're good. You're actually very good. You have a natural talent with words and I found myself smiling while I read them. I liked how you explained the reasons behind Alexander's action in taking Bagoas to his bed. Though I do feel sorry for Hephaistion. Don't mind me, I always have a soft spot on the poor man.

I sure love to read more from you soon! :)

Nicely written. I like the reason you gave Alexander for seeking other lovers.

I loved the way how Hephaistion dealt with his 'problem' in your story. - and they found Elysium in the heart of the other - it's so very sweet :)

I loved this. Beautiful expression of emotion and realistic thoughts and words from both. I was happy to see that Bagoas had his place, and it was NOT in the king's heart. Better to use him as you described and save the tender passion for Phai. Thank you for this lovely story.

I hope this is the beginning of many more stories we can see from you. You have really captured the way I feel about Alexander and Hephaestion. Please share more of your thoughts and dreams with us again.

Looking forward to see more soon,

classyblue