bonne fic!

So, what's with the third draft? Significant changes or cleanup?

You do know how to hang those cliffs! Nicely done. The series continues to be quite enjoyable. Thank you.

great story!

Keeps getting better and better with each new Book. Off to read Book 4 now. Keep up the good work.

loving these stories, looking forward to the next one.

Nice chapter.

Enjoyed the meeting and you are right that it does seem Williards style.

Glad to see Manticore putting some fo the new tech into production already. The comm system does have huge tactical advantages, not to mention strategic with the use of relays every 15 or so lightyears. Manticore will be able to coordinate their forces much easier with the coming war.

Liked the meeting and striking up a friendship with Raoul. Hopefully they meet again when he comes to Grayson. I am looking forward to how that turns out with the changes that Xander has made.

Look forward to seeing what the ship in yellow space is, the description fo yellow space really does make me think of babylon 5 hyperspace/jumpspace though I thought that was more read than yellow.

A thought for the story, since you already quoted Clarke's law about advanced tech and magi, what does a scientific study of magic potions show. Many of the medical potions would be interesting to analyze and would be beneficial if they could reproduce them technologically(ex. skelegrow, peper-up, others).

More soon please.

Interesting chapter.

I like the showing of the Graysons taking advantage of the things that Xander is teaching them. Xander was trudging along keeping so busy (and feeling useful) but was so easily replaced after he explained what he was doing to someone else. Guess he will have to come up with something new to keep busy now.

The meeting on Manticore sounds interesting. Look forward to it.

More soon please.

Good chapter.

Interesting idea to combine a shield and a wedge. You could use shields immediately on non-mobile platforms like the defense stations most planets keep in orbit. I would think they would be better than spherical sidewalls or maybe easier to combine the two systems. IIRC Grayson has quite a few defense stations (though quite small) as does Manticore (at Junction and in planets orbit) not to mention the shipyards.

Like the way the SGC turned the Tok'ras little skim around on them and stole a battleship. Should be useful.

With more gliders to study (and perhaps some notes from Egeria) it should also speed up the F302 program.

The new EDC makes sense with the SGC being one of their divisions since they now have spacecraft. Though using the ship to base the SGC does prevent them from deploying it somewhere for a mission.

Also like the way you have changed the story of Ke'ra. Since she is a fully qualified doctor perhaps she would like to train Dawn.

I also like the idea of the Dargel research as an alternative to prolong. Those to old to use prolong might find it useful.

More soon please.

Nice chapter.

I liked the idea of the group capturing April and reprogramming her. I am sure she could be useful in the future. I have to wonder though if they are able to program and build her, what about other types of robots to help with industrial applications. One of Grayson's big problems is man power shortage. So automation in their factories would probably be welcome.

Interesting idea to set up Xander H with his own girls.

More soon please.

Nice chapter.

REally liked the meeting with the SGC.

I love the idea of clone Jack joining the Scooby gang. I think he would be a good ally.

The attraction/sexual curiosity of Samantha Carter to Xander is interesting, I hope you do something with it. I recall one story where you had Xander and Tara seduce her and I loved it.

I also liked Xander's flirting with Honor, before he switched to a more business tone.

More soon please.

Glad to see your stories on .

Really enjoyed this story.

I love the crossover with Honor Harrington, I wish there were more stories that crossed over with that universe. Having Xander go to Grayson is an interesting choice, they do have the heavy metal issue which kind of hints at Naqudah presence.

More soon please.

a cliff hanger THATS JUST MEAN :) hurry with the next book please

Reading this story kind of gets annoying after the first book...the fact that xander meets alot of crossover females who are attracted to him and flirt with him but in the end they always find someone else...after the 3rd time i saw this i started to get seriously annoyed...

awesome third story can't wait for more XD