This was a lovely story if it was longer I think the story would’ve run a lot more smoother but overall great work!

That was so well written! The three doors at the beginning was very clever! I like how it's used throughout. I do feel like this could've also been a slightly linger one shot. Maybe bringing the bg stories with the exile and katara's mom earlier in the story or have more snippets of their tension-filled relationship before the whole smut thing.

This was really cool! Loved it!

While this was well written, I can't help but think that this was a missed opportunity for a Thing crossover. Zuko even brings the flamethrower.

This was a really unique AU, and you captured their personalities really well. Good job!

Beautiful 3

That was really, really good. It was well-written, with just enough heat. I really liked this story - kudos to you!

This was very good, I enjoyed it!

i think this story beautifully captured katara's and zuko's unique chemistry...both of them are so hellbent not to appear vulnerable that it makes the last couple of scenes all the sweeter

This is Fucking Brilliant!

I loved the whole concept, the interaction between the characters, EVERYTHING!

Beuatifully written, intresting and new bonus points for a little smut! XD

I'd love to read more from you!

Not bad at your first attempt at smut. I liked it, a different kind of AU. Hope you keep writing more!