One of the best stories I have ever read..Emotional and action packed. I love your writing style.

Damn this is some real deep sentimental shit, im feeling Magneto's pain.

Best story ever!

This is one of the most well-written fanfiction stories I have ever read, across all fandoms. I have read this one and your other 2 in this series since 2013, when I first got an account. I have also read your other ones like Beauty and the Beast and Sins of the Father and the Legacy/Blood Brothers. I remember waiting on the edge of my seat for the next chapter of The World United, when you were still writing it. Your characters are very well-developed, and every chapter seems to move the story forward. I laughed and cried when the characters did because they were so relatable, and I could literally envision what was happening in my mind because your scenes and descriptions were just right. Emma's depression and insanity, Logan finding good inside himself, Creed's utter vindictiveness, Charles and Raven's protectiveness over each other, Charles/Moira (OMG I LOVE YOU FOR THAT), Rahne's insecurity and getting Moira as a mother, Erik and his friendship/broship/bromance with Charles, Neena and her need for revenge, many others I could mention... you pulled them all off effortlessly. There was no going on and on about a single character or feeling that a character experienced, but rather things were revealed as you went down the plot line. I like that because it made the story easier to digest, and you always kept the story moving forward, instead of backtracking too much or describing too much like other stories I've read. Other authors I noticed put too much description of a character or of certain emotions that the character is feeling in one place, and so further down the story line it is just the same stuff rehashed all over again. And I also like how you didn't feel the need to start out your story with developed characters and friendships. They were imperfect, hurting people who bonded out of necessity, and turned into something stronger together. Erik and Charles' friendship was rocky at first, and Logan was a killer just like his bro. But that changed over time.
And you made your characters struggle. As an author myself, you have to realize that you have to 'be mean' to your characters sometimes. You can't just let the hero get by unscathed, because then nothing happens. Jean Grey, Harry Potter, anyone?
Please write more, if you can. Haha if only this could be made into a real book series. I would totally buy it.

awwww this was so sad yet so fitting! you write really well! im enjoying this story immensely ;)

Ashgshdhaoewihoaljaoej I love it! This story was amazing; my favorites are ones where the romance doesn't move along to quickly. The characters were realistic and I love the concept of Moira being willing to care for Rahne. To be honest, I haven't even seen First Class, but I plan to soon. I'm gonna go read the sequel right now (because who needs sleep anyway?)

Loved this fic! It was great! Please write a sequel!

nice

I felt that Charles was too weak here. I do not that I'm glad they got there just in time, Raven was brilliant I liked that she had gotten a chance to "fight"

oh. it's like there's still a few things they haven't learnt about each other. Not that it really matters, I suppose you just don't tell people "hey, I got this step brother that tried to kill me and make my life hell", I think most would just like to pretend it never happened. This is interesting.

I've always felt this churning in my stomach when I saw the First class movie and all of Raven and Charles' interactions. This is another of them. I love it!

Haha. That was hilarious, and poor Charles. Charles is totally an old fart and a hundred other things. This Logan/Silverfox is good touch too. I like the sleepover part as well, how cute!

This brings be back to when Erik told Charles to hurry up a get a child. Oh my gosh. the mental cuteness.

I've always loved Charles. He's such a lovable character, and this brings me back to why I've first thought that Charles Xavier was such an awesome person. I love Moira here as well, not too many show her depth. Her light perhaps but not always what's deep inside. I loooove it!

Squee. I resort to being a mindless fan with this. I love it!