Well, having read the original version, I can see how much you have improved.
Even though this wasn't updated since five years, I still wanted to write a review, because it is very well written. It would be nice if you'd continue the story, but I don't think I can hope for that after five years. Which is sad, because this is one of the best ZX fanfictions I've read.

Good luck! and great story! Nyan! :3

This is a beautiful revision of your old story. When I first learned you were rewriting, I thought, “Why!?” However, after reading the revised version, I realize that it is actually better than before. It takes something else, to be able to take an already good old story and turn it into an awesome one. I can not wait to see Prometheus and Pandora, as well as how this story turns out. Please update soon and good luck. May fate, fortune, and God favor you. Make a story that will do the old one and the ZX series proud!

Don't give up Kuraselache, your work is really good! Hope offline matters improve for you so you'll have time to enjoy your hobbies, in the meantime I'll keep watching. :)

Take care of yourself until then. Hope to see you again soon.

This chapter is a massive improvement over the previous version. The only real thing that I can complain about is that I sometimes felt like things were moving to quickly or that I was being fed to much information at once, but that might just be because I've read the previous version and knew all of that stuff. Anyway, everything else was much better, the fighting, the characters, basically everything. I liked the way Grey became the Second Red Megaman much more in this version. It was fittingly poetic for him to take down what was left of Ouroboros. Mainly because it was his blood and by proxy Albert's blood that caused it to revive. Grey's blood was what caused Ouroboros to come back in its zombie form, right? My favorite part of the chapter was when Grey found Albert's corpse. That scene held an amazing amount of power, due to the symbolism and the events of that scene, and most importantly Grey doesn't know how important that corpse was! He was looking at the corpse of Father/himself and he didn't even know it, while we, the readers did! That was some powerful symbolism there. I also love what you did to Messanos in this version. In the previous version he was a mindless thug who I could never see as a threat or believe was possible to come up with a plan, even when I reminded myself that Grey was a kid and new to the hero business. In this version I find Messanos to be very interesting but also somewhat tragic. He founded Giga Arcadia in this version to help people but has become obssessed with order in the process making him a much greyer character morally speaking. Messanos, as I said before loves order and believes anything he does to enforce it to be the right thing to do, including to try to kill a little kid. I have also noted that Messanos seems to be channeling Sigma, Elpizo, and Copy X to a certain degree. All villains that started out with noble intentions (except Copy X who just loved order) but fell off the slippery slope and became monsters. You have done an incredible job turning Messanos from a one-dimensional dumb thug into this three-dimensional tragic figure. Finally, the thing about this story I like the best is Grey being the user of Model Z. Somthing like that has never been done before in Megaman Fanfiction to my knowledge, thus making you original. I also think that Grey needs to get a cool nickname to honor the name of Zero, and to symbolize the mantle he has taken up. Like as I wrote before the Second Red Megaman or Zero the Third (He technically the third person to become Zero in a way) or somthing like that. But that last part could just me being a Zero fan kicking in.

Thank you releasing a new chapter kuraselache. I like how the variant galleon evolution theory. All we need are somr galleons with shoulder cannons to put that theory to rest. I also hope to see plenty of ventxashe and greyxaile in the story

I am thoroughly enjoying this re-write! I have to go double-check the old fic to see where that one guy is at the end though, I've gotten curious...

Big boys and their toys, eh. Can't wait to see how things heat up further in the upcoming chapters.

You and neonazo have got me interested in the zx games with your stories and respective remakes. I like how you portray the characters as well. Looking forward to the changes,in story

So this story has finally been rebooted I'm not sure where I stand with this story. As you yourself said the previous version of this story started out rather lackluster but later it became good then you stopped it for plot reasons. I really don't have much to say about these two chapters due to them being the obligatory mysterious introdution chapters. But expect critism from me as the plot grows.

Ah, I see you've touched up upon Vent getting RID of Model O instead of that having just "happened" out of the blue. Figures Area K would be the best place to "do the dirty deed".

As for Mikhail, he's a crafty one, that's for sure. Instead of freaking out like the others, he took the initiative and bolted when he could. Very well-written.

The prologue has been very well done. Far more detailed and foreboding than in the original.

Can't wait to read more.