Again, very nice! This is an awesome AU!

I am working my way through your series. This one was heartbreaking. It is like they are only a shadow of who they could or should be. Well done.

Awesome! So glad that the deal allowed Belle and Rumpel to be together, even though I've read the other pieces to the story and know that there is bitter to go along with the sweet. Still, it's time they didn't have before and I love the way you've chosen to tell the story.

Thanks for posting, I'll try to get to all the pieces and let you know what I liked best about them. Seems the least I can do for sharing your awesome with

-Ellie

Great job, wonderful. So very cute yet sad at the same time. Great, just wonderful. Beautifully written, fantastic job.

Yours Truly,

DCdreamer

QuirkyGirl22 Oops! Editing error. I've gone back and changed it to "a kiss"... "Another" was in the first draft, but I thought I had changed it before publishing. Thanks for the heads up.

And thank you to everyone who is reviewing! I love to hear your feedback! There are now 4 parts to this series posted, with a 5th and 6th on the way.

Oh my God, I freakkin' love you. A small question: If they never kissed the first time, how can Rumpel be worried about "another kiss"? Just curious, please don't take it as criticism. Having Belle and Rumpel happily married in Storybrooke is like a gift to my inner insane fangirl :).

I loved this. I hope you continue it!

Simply lovely!

I had you on Author Alert because of your excellent BBT fics and had never even seen OUAT when you posted "I Will Not Kiss You." Foolish me, I followed the link and - with the help of Wikipedia to figure out what what going on - discovered my OTP. Since then, I've downloaded the episode and combed through for more fic to feed the monster. This is all your fault. (Well, maybe yours and Jane Espenson's - former Buffy writers have so much to answer for.) Bottom line, your first OUAT fic hooked me and I HADN"T EVEN SEEN THE SHOW. I'm so glad you're continuing this storyline.

That was awesome! I love this story as much as I did the last! Is the end? I hope not! You capture these characters perfectly! I love it how Rumpel has no idea what all of th electronics are yet he already knows how to use them! Keep writing! Hurry! :D

Yay! Fluff! This was wonderful, and so sweet, I loved it!

Heya,

I absolutely love this piece, even more than your first! I would love to see more pieces based around the married Golds. It's such a unique and brilliant idea. Hope you write more!

I really loved "I Will Not Kiss You" and I'm so glad you expanded on it! I'd love to read more on Rumple and Belle (or Jolie and Mr. Gold) exploring this new dynamic of their relationship while coming to terms with their new world. I hope there will be more coming! Keep up the great writing! :)