Oh my gosh! That was so sweet! This is a poem that is well descriptive, elaborate and AMAZING! 10 out of 10!

This sounds like something Zecora would write so i must say your skills are quite tight.

those rhymes of you kick ass! you should feel proud

That was beautiful! I understand Sweetie's POV...when I was a young girl I wanted to be just like my older sister. My sis was a little more supportive than Rarity was initially, but whatever. Excellent job!