Please update this story soon as 's very interesting and is one of the Fate/Nanoha crossovers in this site

this fic is so great. I hope the story continue

I wonder if Shirou will still meet Hayate.

huh.

So sad... So very, very sad.

You made what so many try when making a crossover, a cohesive narrative and world. Everyone is their respective self, no changes made to fit the plot nor for the sake of a joke. They react accordingly to the events and their personalities, not as plot devises.

Not to mention that your narrative was amazing.

But yet here we are, 6 years later and no update, is a pity that you have died. I don't know if it is actual death or excess of life, but the truth remains; this story will not be completed. Which is why I am sad.

But still, I thank you for such a small source of happiness and wonder. May you be resting well, alive or not.

This is quite interesting because the Book of Darkness had a unique set of Female individuals to protect it.

The second issue is whether he will accept that deadly ideal of his to save everyone because this dream of his is distorted, and caused him a great amount of misery and pain.

I see will Shirou have his full capabilities like Tracing and the incredible world of his that summons weapons.

I really hate this about the Nanoha series. and no one ever notices and does anything about it.

TSAB is a tyrannical invasive government. They have no right to "investigate" earth. Earth is not a part of their government. Just like they had no right to tell Shirou flight spells required a license. The planet was not theirs, they we excavating a planet that didn't belong to anyone. Thus, Shirou who was not a citizen of their government, was doing as he chose in a planet not in their territory.

TSAB coming to earth to clean up their own mess with the Jewel Seeds is one thing. Giving orders to earth citizens and trying to control earth mages is another. It is an UNADMINISTERED planet. That means it is NOT a part of TSAB and until earth either joins willingly or is taken by force of war, they have no rights over any humans! Fuck TSAB.

Second time ive read this fic and despite my tastes has become rather picky after reading so many fanfics, i still think this is a good one.

And i still think its a shame the fic has been abandoned since quite a while... over 5 and half years already since the last update.

It would be good if a good author could pick it up from where it ended.

Good chapter

Luckily shirou.
Every time someone offered to perfect or save shirou, he gives them a death glare. However, when he says that to a complete stranger in a more monument to task why only praise him. Shirou is a complete hypocrite that needs to be punched in the face, or completely decimated and left completely crushed.
However, he made up for it by puching shinji. So it bounces out.
Even shinji helps make up for it by trying to convince his friends he just punched him to run. So they they don't become bug feed, and him being punished more after saving them.

You know they have spent years in that town with questions blooming left and right about his fathers past, and the magical inhabitants around them. Yet they remain silent, and don't look into it at all. Heck they barely pay attention when a magical phenomenon happens, and Forget about the next day.
Even S.T.A.B when they lost two top agents under fishy and mysterious circumstances does not launch a investigation to figure out where they are and what happened to them.

Lastly I completely see why this is the top nanoha x fate story. Good job, and I hope someone continues the story, especially with especially with the grail war around the corner.

Good chapter

Ok the fact that he think Rin is not a magic user, even with book of spells that's on Par with a noble phantasms shows has limited his Magical potential is over all. Excluding a few areas.

Vita is dressing up as a zombi sameri is bond to draw attrition from the chirch. However, considering there representative is making zombies I think he will just ignore it.

Manly he should use more necromancy or call a specialist, like the master of mordread.

So that's how Gilgamesh tested Ea's full power.

Glad to see she is improving her archery.
I also love Sigmum is getting so much attention. To be fair she is one of the hottest and most attractive girls in nonoha. Add in a aura that most girls imagine their prince charming to have, then I don't blame them for falling for the leader of the Knights.

Lastly did Vita just summon a servant. Please tell me she did. Regardless they are going to have a talk Latter about Irisval's summoning circle.

Good chapter

If he hates bugs with big teeth that much, then he would have a heart attack if he heats Zelchen, or sees Sakura's training.

A futcher archer class servant with no long rang attacks. Hahaha.
No wonder his fucher self only uses swords.

A am willing to bet Emiya is haveing a sneezing attack in the thrown of heroes when shirou was talking about archery.

And lastly the king appears , and rim has taken interest in shirou.

P.s glad you explained why the he has taken so long to find the book of darkness.

I see shirou is going with his sister's Miyu methoud of flying by creepy platforms (like in bleach)' rather then his sisters Iliya witch runs on something similar to pixie dust.

I see Rin and Sakura have finally entered the picture. For once thank you shinji.
It would be vary interesting to see Rin and Sakura's reaction to th Knights, and Vice versa.

Good chapter

Ok I get it. Magic secrets are better at producing prana faster then lincor cores, but Lincor cores can Store more energy.
Nice way of balancing the two.

Glad to see the yakuza being a boss, but knowings when magic is around and not to get involved.

Her instincts about shinji and his family home being bad new is extremely good.

Did those 3 girls rain into Ibriaki wall drinking? :3

I see shiro finally starting to suffer from the books powers physically. If it was not for his magic secrets providing extra energy and the Avalon slowing done the deterioration.
As for ways to stop the deteriorating effects all to gether my best idea is to summon saber so Avalon would have the power to remove the book's negative influence completely. Or get media, archer, or Gilgamesh to use rule breaker on the book of sky to separate from shiro, destroy, and/or reprogram to a more friendy settings and programs.

I think you captured shiro's personality perfectly. His ideas are extremely rages and can get anyone behind history dreams, and his hardwork and determination is breathtaking. However, he is also extremely thick head, fullish to the highest level, and a Little hypocrite. How's sphere luck allows him to Easley surpass Berserker's god hand on how many times he can avoid death.
Hear me out.
Shiro is shown to be extremely hard worker, with ideals everyone wants you strive to. With confection to the highest level. Shiro would run and without question to face a god like opponent just to save one person. Even though he would rather avoid fighting, and understands there power. Shiro troule embodies the core of all heroes great and small, even before he dose anything noteworthy.
That being said shiro constantly refers be on the front line agents enemy, even when there are people far stronger and more prepared to deal the dilemma a few feet away. Heck most of the time he gets in their way. This is what led him to waiting two command spells, suffering from injuries that would kill a normal man 10 times over, and ended up losing saber. To make matters worse he constantly misses the peaple who needed help most like Sakura, and repeats and makes obvious mistakes a elemity schooler could easily avoid, for no good reason.

Lastly I like what you did with the knowledge the book gives. It's both powerful, but only truly effective if one has the magical affinity, or can decode it. The amount of power a caster would have, especially Edison, Babbage, or shirou kotomine is absolutely frightening.
Edison and Babbage are some of the greatest geniuses who ever lived and with there caster class powers the book They could easily become the most likely one to win a grail war filled with ridiculously powerful servants.