Lol that last chapter really made me laugh. I certainly enjoyed the serious chapters earlier on too - the relationship between Sides and Prowl is great

Just need to say I was cracking up laughing when reading this. Thanks!

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This had me rolling along laughing form the start.
Clever Sideswipe watching out for Mrs. Lennox's reputation. :)
That poor car thief. He's going to think long and hard the next time he tries to lift a ride.

That was just about the greatest thing ever. I can't tell you how much I laughed!

Yeah! Update!

That was the best laugh I have had in a long time, I was laughing so hard my family demanded to know what was so funny, so I then read it out loud to them. Just wanted you to know you had all of us in stitches.

Keep up the good work, and I'm looking forward to the next time inspiration strikes for this story... Oh, we're you planning to follow up on Side's attempt to pay up? That could be funny.

That's a lovely story, and a great journey through the inside of Prowl's head. Very, very nicely done. (and funny in spots, too.)

LOL! You almost have to feel sorry for the carjacker.

I can see Prowl's processor whirling from here ...

Hysterical. I'm mailing the link to all the friends i have in the world right now.

I absolutely loved chapter 2 and 3 picks up after it wonderfully. I'm really enjoying Prowl's reactions to Earth and can't wait to read more.

Hilarious! Flawless writing, as usual. I love the way you portray all of them; you know how each one would react to just about anything. Please continue updating!

Quite nicely done! I enjoyed the (semi-)Reasonable Sideswipe, and the I Am Being Reasonable Dammit Prowl, as well as the Full-on Ratchet. Then Prime showed up and knew exactly what to tell everybody, after which Will and Sara deconstructed Prowl's snit. Lovely.

Wonderful!

Another excellent chapter in your story.

The way Prime handled Prowl is priceless. "For the good of the unit." :D

Trying to figure out what exactly was going on as the story progresses was fun. Why would Prowl object to a simple medical procedure? Oh, that's why. :p

I always enjoy the way you depict the slowly developing intimacy between the Cybertronian and human characters.

Keep up the good work!

A very nice chapter. It's nice to see Prowl finally connecting with his new "home". I'm looking forward to the discussion between him and Sideswipe about how the humans aren't as fragil as he thinks. Nice story overall. :-)