Ok. I'm going to die. I'm dead... ;-)

Is there gonna be a sequel? Please! I want to know what happen to Vivian and the baby.

I loved your story,

especially where Vivian and Yoshawnda

fight. Cant wait for the next part! :)

Very good stories! I LOVEEEE THEM!

Awww I loved it and the ending is so sad to me.

I hope Gabriel and Ulf beat that whore's ass!

Hopefully the baby will be okay on the next one you make.

At first I was like, "Awww, man...no punching? No hair-pulling? No mud wrestling?" Then the pushing down the stairs came, and it was awesome. What would be really great-albeit incredibly tragic-is if the baby had down syndrome or something because of it (God, aren't I terrible?).

*Disclaimer: if this review offends anybody, it was not meant to do so. I apologize*