i, LOVE IT

It was so good! Especially when you described how Sharpclaw became more and more Evil and angry, surely Ashfur had felt The same way... it Should almost have been in The books I hope you will write more about Sharpclaw, Falconpaw and Crowpaw :D

Im one year late, but who cares? I came from a River Spirit speedpaint. And I think this story is absolutely fantastic. I just love it, the twists are amazing, the betrayal... it truly is a great story. I especially love it when it explains why everyone is evil, and all that jazz. My mom read this at the right time. Her name is Heather Simmet, and she commented that post. At the moment, shes kinda delirious from the flu. I tried to remind her about this story, and how i couldn't remember Nightshade's name, so I called her Night-whatsit. She suddenly turned to me and said, "Booger flingers?"

AMAZING!1

Medicine cats meet StarClan at half-moon. Just had to say it. Great book.

That's too much. I sincerely hope everything goes alright for you. I feel for you and don't mind all the other accounts you make because your so awesome!

I came in the story later obviously, but I'm fine with the slow updates as long as it's good. I write myself, and I absolutely believe lack of motivation is a real excuse. Anyway, I know you got a life outside of this and anxiety and depression really sucks. But if you hang in there and just keep trying, I promise, you have a follower here.

You really have progressed as a writer throughout this story. You went from barely keeping me interested, to an author that could write an entire book in a chapter, on a dark, dark life, to a bright apprentices love affair! And you actually made it work! Great job, amazing improvement.

This book started out rough, but you have the hang of it now. You have successfully made me interested in the last few chapters. It is no longer a chore to read this.

I thoroughly enjoyed this chapter.

Pretty good book so far. The one thing I would have to say is that the characters are developing really fast. I guess that's just your style of writing and you have ALOT of characters so it would take a long time to develop them slowly... but that's what turns a good book, into a great book. Anyway, my little advice is I guess just for the characters relationships to be more built up. So far, not bad.

Although the chapters are short you somehow make it work.

Best chapter yet! TBH I was actually losing hope and decided that I would read one more chapter. Now I'm hooked!

Omg so Good! I LOVE HOW YOU PUT SHARPFANG AS THE FIRST DARK FORREST CAT, all the plot twists, I just love it, I can't explain how good it was. This is awesome! Make another please

NOOOOO not Shadowclan!