I read now through both parts in one sitting and wow is it greatly done. You've written it very well with a good chara development that left me wishing that those two will in the end finally find their happiness together (even if it is a shipping I normally don't really look into)

I want to say thank you for making this wonderful story as it really did take me on one hell of a journey. Your writing style is great yet I felt it could have been a little more detailed. Still this story had me going through many emotions like the first one but this story really pulled at my heart strings so just thank you. Keep writing for you are great writer.

holy shit somehow you made me laugh and cry and be really creeped out all at the same time

CLAY! Oh thank god I I didn't want him to die. I love you clay. sence the last chapter I have been weighting depressing poems that relate to that. thank you for bringing him back. *dies in corner from Feels and tears*

holly crap Cross you are freaky. I don't like you Cross or Vidic you are disturbing!

Who is the mole it had better not be Desmond's dad!

I found your sequel I'm a happy woman now!

Please let there be a chapter or one-shortish things written about Clay and Desmond in the same body.

Maybe place it during Thirty three or after this, but those parts where they were sharing a body are my all time FAVORITE parts along with the whole story in general that really moved me.

Please do something concerning the share body hint at least! Other than that...ai love yo- I mean this story you wrote...and you too...uh... MORE!

Sequel? Please, like now?

Would you think badly of me, if I told you the ending almost made me cry?

This series was. . . amazing. Really. I've always been fond of Clay, and this story . . . it works so well. Thanks for it. :D

K9

Wait. What. Noooooooo this ending is so cryptic I can't! :( Add to that the Creed! Mygod! Are you like a philosophy teacher or theologist or SOMETHING BECAUSE HOW CAN YOU WRITE THESE MIND-BOGGLING ISSUES DOWN TO THE DOT IN EVERY SINGLE WORD OF YOUR STORY. It's like you breathe such age-old wisdom!

So I shall try to make sense of this Epilogue BECAUSE OHMIGOD you cannot leave us hanging here! So am I right in assuming (or are you to let us assume away) that Desmond returned to a -memory- of the data fragment that is Clay in the Animus? As if he really, perhaps in a sick twist that both the encoded memory of Clay (an A.I./Animus-encryption/memory) and the actual consciousness of Clay (the real him), it is possible that he was both NOT-REAL AND REAL throughout the events of the story? So when Desmond loads a previous memory/code of him saved in the Animus, it's -almost- or possibly the very same Clay he met? That "Nothing is true. Everything is permitted." in the eyes of the viewer and of everything that has passed and -could- occur? You're pulling my leg here! I- I am at a loss of words. This was one hell of a ride I don't know if I'd like to tread again, because of these feels and uncertainty and open-ended-ness it's like Philosophy again. I-

Excellent work.

Ohmylord, this is so freaking beautiful it hurts. Lovely chapter!

Oh wow, this story. ;w;

I just spent the last two nights reading all of your writing and wow, that tragedy. D: It's a miracle I made it through the day.

I love love LOVE your writing. I hadn't really considered 16/17 as a pairing before this, but wow, you've got me hooked like no other. (and it hurts. hurts so good.) You write tragedy and the descent into it so well, so well sometimes I wish you didn't. I'm sorry, I just don't handle sadness well. But I love it.

(For the record, I got abnormally excited when you mentioned him traveling and bonus points if he traveled through our hometowns. I got so close - close with Flagstaff, and then excited at the mention of SD. Currently stationed less than 50 miles from where the Farm should be.)

This series has affected me. I like a good tragedy, and damn you really do write them well. I read Synchronous first, and I still believe that's my favorite, but this series was really amazing. I'm sounding like a broken record, but really, wow! Minimal issues with spelling and grammar, proper use of punctuation and words, wonderful characterization, and well-written adult themes of sexy sex and violence! Also, darkfic. I like darkness.

I look forward to any of your future writing and how it breaks my heart. Thank you, so much, for writing all of this and sharing it with the internet.

Skitty

I loved it so much! You did n amazing job! *rereads*. At first I was really. Ervous that Clay had been the price that Desmond had had to pay to save the world, but when I realised that he was alive I became even more nervous about him dying and about his relationship with Desmond. I was hooked up to the very last word to this story! It was absolutely amazing! I hadn't read a fanfic this good in quite a while! Really, congratulations :D I hope that you write more fanfics for this wonderful pairing! I'll follow you with great interest in your future project _

Oh. Shit. When he was cut off mid-sentence I honestly felt like I died with him.