Though there’s a lot of typos end some grammar mistakes, I thoroughly enjoyed the story and am on to read the next one! Thanks for a good read.

hmmm. i disliked draco's character in this. i dont like to see him soo scared and soo defeated infront of harry. otherwise, i liked the story.

*rofl* Killjoy Granger, the Ballbreaker, telling off someone for being emasculating. Priceless. Why exactly did she beat up Ron and send picking birds at him when she supposedly loves him?

Who doesn't apologise for slicing someone open in a bathroom, doesn't get a thank you either.
I wish rocks would fall on all the Gryffindors and kill them.

I loved the ending. Was wonderful. I think that you wrote the whole break down of Harry and Ginny really well, and his slow realisation. I also really liked Blaise as the facilitator. I was not totally convinced by the angry/violent Harry and the 'it's not normal thing'. It just seems out of character for him. Perfectly fine for many teenage boys but it just didn't seem like Harry. I loved the ending. Many thanks for all of your efforts!

Great story and perfect ending.

It been a. fun. Journey.

The talk if the nightmare.

The love making

Cinflict when coming out by kissing with draco

I am looking forward for sequel if not from u but the one in my heart

Draco stares at him. "What?"

Harry takes his hand back and folds his arms. "Open up your shirt. I want to see what I have done."

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angery harry pressing draco against the wall. Hot
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Draco muttered harry no harry please no in his nightmare while ron and harry was in the room.

I wonder what the F was he drwamig about lol

"You know, I don't buy that you didn't know it was me. Why didn't you tell on us?"

"That should be obvious." Draco swallows. "I didn't want you to die."

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It was slow building Drarry, no much other character interaction but it look like the plot picking up speed when draco and harry have a conflict!

Oh onlu memorable thing was when draco show his arm was unmark and harry touch the surface of tge skin said "soft"

Which shock both of them of the touch and comMent slipped out of harry

(sighs) this story had me from the start and I loved how it went. Bravo! Bravo!

I love !

I love :)

I'm finding it really hard not to just give up on this. Why is harry being so cruel. On the other hand, the strength of your writing has me sticking it out at least for one more chapters

Your Hermione is dull and unintelligent... way too OOC