Reviews for Stay With Me |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This was amazing! I loved the whole entire thing and never wanted to stop reading. Awesome job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This really is a great story ! Well done ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() When Katniss levels the "Why are you doing this?" question, I was expecting for Peeta to swoop in and kiss her in response, sort of a first Hunger Games movie moment. Oh, well. This is just as nice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Seriously?! She has to be married or she can't graduate? Is Haymitch trying to blackmail her by hitting on her? That is such bullcrap! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Man, the Mellark family dinner table is a car-show. Glad Peeta got out quick to go to his girlfriend's! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! Prim is a total gossip and it's awesome! Sure, little sister, push your big sibling into starting a romantic affair with a man! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like Katniss with her hair down, too, Peeta. And aww: her last words, is she... flirting with him? It would appear so! Yay! |
![]() ![]() ![]() WOW! Gale is so already on the mark equating Katniss blushing with her thinking about Peeta! She is starting to be seduced... |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Having food on the table doesn't mean your life is perfect." Indeed - try having an abusive mother, for starters, he seems to be saying. Poor Peeta! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahhh... so she harbors prejudice for the elite, does she? Very... biased of her. This translates well from class warfare between Merchant and Seam. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I wonder... is Morgantown an actually municipality in West Virginia? Give us more setting context! Please, and thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Katniss is so wary here. Almost shrewish. Unwooable. She seems to hate Peeta in the start of the chapter, regretting having a class together. She will fall in love, though. She will fall in love... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Of course Peeta would be watching and pining for Katniss from afar in a coffee shop! I like the start to this modern AU, especially with historical references to the Iraq War! |
![]() ![]() Beautiful rings. Peeta standing in the door like that waiting for an invitation is creepy. He never pushed her to do anything - in canon he followed her lead. Standing in the doorway like that is pressure. |
![]() ![]() “We may have never actually talked about the nature of our relationship, but that has everything to do with my own fear and denial and nothing to do with his feelings for me. Oh yeah, so why didn’t gale Ever say anything if it was all on your and your emotions. Dumb excuse Where the hell did Peeta get money for a ring |