I know I'm late to the game but just wanted to let you know I loved this story. Going to look out for more 3

I know you wrote this ages ago, but just in case you still check this account and write any other US based stories, we say bathroom, not washroom. It’s used so often here that it really sticks out! Living your story otherwise.

Loved it!

GAHHHHH “my own spot...is by my side” I seriously screamed. I love Shenny and this is so good! I love the sweet romantic moments and how they’re so good for each other

You have such a wonderful way with words, scenes, everything. I'm also being awful and forgetting to review as much as I did the first time around with this story.

I love the details you put into the conversations between everybody. It makes it feel like an actual episode from the show.

I really love story so I'm back to read it again and hopefully manage to leave a few reviews on chapters that lack one from me already.

I will never look at physics the same again. My goodness that was hot. Also I have really liked this story very much. I would have loved to have seen the wedding but sometimes those get redunate. This was an awesome story all around.

great story!

I apologize for the previous "review". I accidentally opened the review box, but had a Dickens of a time trying to close it.

For my real review, I loved the depth of your story-telling. I also appreciated the research you did for most of it (a Penny flashback in one chapter incorrectly listed the Husker colors as crimson and cream rather than the actual Scarlet and Cream, but I digress).

While the plot was intended to be away from canon, you still kept everyone mostly 'in-character'. I, as a fan, appreciate that. Given the stage at which canon was set (just before Howard's trip to space), I actually seen how things would've been plausibly unfolded this way from that point forward.

Very few M-rated stories take the time to actually make the entire story (not just the 'ooh-baby-bump-and-grind' bits) worth reading. This tale is quite the exception to that trope.

Thank you for such a wonderful tale.

Your friend in writing,

The Samurai Crunchbird

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This is far the best fanfic written in this fandom for me. The slowburns, the development of relationship. Thank you for making this :)

Dan! You made me like Jeff... lol

You tore me to pieces with this chapter.
Gah! And I'm not even half way through.
On to read more.
Thank you for captivating me into this world

This is by far one of the sweetest stories I have read in a very long time. I absolutely loved it. Thank you for writing and sharing such a heart warming story.