This is odd story. John's not concerned about his other patients that he saw to daily anymore?

I love the glee Sherlock has when he gets a tough case.

He's so smart and yet he's like a child. But then again thats why we love him ;D

Once again, Yay for Enola! I think you fit her in very well with the modern setting. Keep up the good work!

I can't stop laughing about the yellow ladder. Where did he get that?

Maybe some investigation will help Sherlock more than laying around in his own head.

I like that you through in the biscuit colored jumper. It just shows how tedious it is for John. Sitting alone with a sedated Sherlock.

Nice job introducing a new (to me) character.

Yay for Enola! I'm still sad that Enola doesn't have more of her own fanfiction. I'm excited you're including her. Keep up the good work!

So, fanfic net must have been broken. I've been trying for 2 days to comment.

I see that both John and Sherlock have real battles to fight.

That was marginally scary o.o

That is neat that you had an actual

really enjoying this so far! interesting plot :) would love to read more.

I like how you wrote this also. John is sticking to his instincts and not letting mycroft run over him.

That's a great cliffie. I'm really enjoying this version of their meeting.

Slash? A little kissing or mutual attraction? Please.

Nice job using their meeting this way.

Then I see a 14 year old rent boy, bleeding to death in a back alley, his pupils blown with amphetamine abuse, and I think maybe this is what my real purpose is.- just what I was thinking before you wrote it. His life is rough. Really, but he does have a purpose.